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for Porcelain

by ElectricAndroid

person aikakone
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quite well done. I like how you showed how distraught Draco was. AFter going through his thoughts, tt made his connection with Bill seem more natural. The only criticism I\'d have is that Draco is not younger than Ginny.