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for Apple pie a la Mode

by Moisie

schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, they way in which this story is written it would be easy to replace Snape with Lockhart (ego and such). LOL
=D
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Apeliotes
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, gods... that is just cruel! *laughing hysterically* I kind of wish you had used someone other than Prof. Snape for the utterly inept lover, but oh hell was that funny! You say that this is taken from real life experience? You poor, poor woman, you got a bad deal. Honestly, I am divided as to whether I would even be able to read the story of the morning after, something tells me it would be about equal parts hilarious and excruciating.

*pausing to think it over*

Okay, I say: go for it, you might as well record the aftermath for posterity, as long as you had to actually live through it.
person ozarkmoon
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! This was just too damn funny. I laughed so hard, the tissue box had to be retrieved! Good job!
person TiQ
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God...

Sudden, terrible memories of the boy who tried to put hickies on innocent areolas...

After all the \"perfect\" sex on this website, it\'s sort of nice to know that it can go badly for anyone. Even our favorite greasy git can have his \"One, two, th-\" moments! Thanks for sharing a hilarious story.
person Paige Black
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, this is great. Boody hilarious, really. I\'ll bet any girl with even a little exerience has a memory like this, although maybe not to the same intensity. Yikes, poor guy (I\'m talking about the one that this really happened to.) for that matter, poor girl, glad I haven\'t been with said \"Potions Master\" before and I pray to God I will never meet a guy like that, ugh. hehehehe, absolutely fantastic story, I can\'t wait to read more.