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for My dream thou brok’st not

by SecretlySnape

person DEBS
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IS THERE GOING TO BE TEN CHAPTERS BEFORE YOU GET TO THE POINT IN THE STORY. SOME TIMES I DONT UNDERSTAND MYSELF. RIGHT I WANT TO KNOW HOW THEY GET TOGETHER IN A STORY SPECIALLY WHEN THE STORY STARTS AND THEY ARE ALREADY TOGETHER YET WHEN SOMEONE STARTS THE STORY PROPERLY LIKE YOU HAVE I GET CRANKY!! LOL I DO NOT UNDERSTAND MYSELF PLEASE UPDATE ABIT MORE REGULARY IT WOULD BE GREAT THIS STORY IS GOING TO BE BRILLANT! UPDATE SOON GREAT STORY!
person Rakina
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start, off to read the next bit!
person Rakina
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pleeease, more. I need to see where this is going!
person Boo
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update it soon! I think it\'ll be good... after only 2 chapters it\'s hard to say but still I like it :D
person Hambares
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What! Ending the chapter there? To cruel!