AFF Fiction Portal
person Modesta
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You started out good but you never wrote the reason why malfoy apperated in to harry\'s room you just jumped into a bet but then you didn\'t write the rules of the bet what happens and such and such like that but i hope you write the reason draco wanted to talk to harry because i\'d like to my self why he went to the trouble to talk to harry
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Must have been some daydream if Snape couldn\'t pull it out of him. Wonder if he used Legimens (sp) to see what Harry was dreaming about. I might have in his place!