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for Punishment in Slytherin

by DagnyTaggart

person Oxygen
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh pleae! We want more! :o)))))))))
person ashley
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it. you kept everyone pretty muchin character and your new character works. she fits in exactly as you wrote, her background was interesting and you didnt go to far into it to make it boring. good job. please finish.
person hi
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
plz add more soon
person anonamous
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quite freaky and revealing, but thats not a bad thing. Poor girl. Keep writing! Post the next chapter soon!
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok. It\'s really, really, really good. More, please?
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Oooh, i\'m loving all of it so far, keep it coming, please!
person Ashley
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Oh my god, this is so bad!

There will be more, right?;-)
person Silver
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Can\'t wait for the next chapter. If I was Marlena\'s roommate, I\'d be plotting ways to make her life a living hell ... if I could restrain myself from killing her first ... lol ... I\'m a true Slyth, babe.
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fuckin' Awesome!
person Emilee
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG i cant wait to see what happens next! this is so much like Draco

more!