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for Punishment in Slytherin

by DagnyTaggart

person War-chan
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 is missing.
person Bob
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww, come on!!! u cant leave it there!!
person Jaime
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is chapter three supposed to be one sentence long?

Interesting story... a look of what really could be the horrors of Slytherin House.
person Dylan
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Chapter three was REALLY short though! :-)
person Nia
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um...shudn't there b more to this chap :( :S
person Galwyrd
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting Story. What's the 1 liner 3rd chapter a little disapointment. Please continue
person Lizzard
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's good... update?
person vicky
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update. is really goood
person s
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person angel
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please updat soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel