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for Becoming Head Girl

by MistressLupin

person Anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You could always write a label that says "borderline" or "possible" non-con.

Just an idea. As it is borderline and everyone will have their own views on the subject.
person lilly
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh i liked it. but then i like rough sex. well a little anyway. this is a great story and i hope we get to read more.
person JW
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, he did tell her to leave, and they had nothing to talk about, so she could've left; also, she stopped telling him to stop, so I'd say it was consensual. In sequel, perhaps she should demand more foreplay?
person eve/roarke
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, confused Hermione and a in control Snape, plus passion rising from both, o.k. it happened
at different times but they got there together in the end, (if you know what I mean),
Look forward to the follow up.