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for Harry's Leviathan

by evilyaoiboy

person Akusaa
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* I wanna know how they got the tape!
person Dezra
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I\'m not liking the Weasley\'s right now...I\'m not sure where this humiliation of Harry is heading. It seems like a good story though.
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just Looking at what you said...
person Fayth
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. I started reading it a while back but wasn\'t going to review because I\'m lazy than I noticed you never update. Please update it\'s a really good story.
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Who\'s name did he yell? Did they pop in because he was screaming? What happens in chapter 5? Did Draco send him this?
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Who\'s name did he yell? Did they pop in because he was screaming? What happens in chapter 5? Did Draco send him this?
person s
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person CrazyObessesedVeelaDracoRabidFangirl
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<.<; i should really make my sn more ... oh wats the word... easy to remember ? *shrugs* anyway plz update soon !! i want to see draco and harry meet at school !! maybe even have harry bend over and draco see the thongs he sent on harry ? mmm that\'d be a turn on im sure >XD anyway, ur story :/ plz update !! i luv ur story !!
~luv~ CrazyObsessedVeelaDracoRrabidFangirl (eck wat a tounge twister, not really but its long ^.^)
person FoxyCharlie
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa!! and hi to you!
and on with the review!

I think you have captured the whole \"Potter-style\" and universe quite good, whit all the characters and surrondings. The thing that may be a little odd is the aunt Linda. Not the fact that she exists, but more the thing of her knowing the Weaslys. It would be more realistic if atleas she haven\'t seen the for as long as Harry\'s been alive.
Other than that I\'ve gotta say that you sure are a funny one!! And I want to know more!! (and I wanna se Harry in a thong!) ^_^
I like the whole mood in the fic, and want it to continue, and I want a happy ending and much love and sappyness! I\'m sooo fed up with all the angsty and unhappy fanfics where noone gets the one they deserves in the end! TT_TT So I demand a happy ending (please? ^^) and more humor!

anyway, good job!
/FoxyCharlie

(if you have a deviantart.com account, visit me! I have the same name there)
person Zomirthrian
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good. Keep writing, i want to read the next part!!!!! Great cliffhanger on the last chapter