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for Harry's Leviathan

by evilyaoiboy

person LoveGD
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh!!!!!!!! Soooo good! Update, update, update, update!!!!! Pretty please?
Later//LoveGD
person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story and I hope you continue writing but you need to get a new beta because you have a lot of misspelled words which makes it somewhat hard to read. Anyway keep up the good work your plot is interesting and witty and I can't wait to see the outcome.
person Gena
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Please keep writing!
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait until chapter 6! They have a videotape? Who is wondering around Malfoy Manor?
person silentstrength07
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sencond time reviewing in five minutes. Yay. Thats gotta be a record or something. Any-who, great chapter, but dude, you seriously need a beta. If you want I can help. I\'d hate to see a great story abandoned for bad grammer. But still, great story, keep updating.
person silentstrength07
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And it was last chapter that made you creame your pants? Great Chapter, I\'ll keep reading if you keep writing.
person rebecca
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a great one i hope u update very soon!
i cant wait untill draco and harry finnally get together
now that is going to be hot!
person Demitria Miriam
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So... you\'re a boy... writing yaoi? ... That so totally rocks!! I have a guy friend that reads it but to my knowledge hasn\'t written anything... this is really good! And here I thought all boys were blundering idiots when it came to describing things! (Kidding!) This is off to a nice start, and I\'m excited about the next chapter! One thing though, the key at the beginning of your entire story, you don\'t need it all that much, most people understand what they mean, though I suppose \"different place, same time\" would be one to keep, but like, the \"beginning/end\" one, you don\'t really need. In any case, this is off to an interesting start. Great job! ^.^
person DraculUnknown
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!......Good story! Its interesting, Funny, hott, hott! lol!and more hott! update soon plz!!
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This Is Me, And I Am So Sorry For Not Updating This Fic In A Long Time, But Don\'t Worry, I Am Updating It Now!