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May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
they sound very...how do I put this? FRUITY. They just kind of be friends and start saying that they are beautiful and stuff, thatst nothing Harry would do let alone Draco. And do watch the past and present tense, um and the grammer...AND the spelling, although I myself do spelling mistakes also.
it\'s cute in a fluffy way.
it\'s cute in a fluffy way.
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May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
a) Stop swithcing between tenses
b) work of your grammar
c) highly OOC. Rather disappointed to be honest.
b) work of your grammar
c) highly OOC. Rather disappointed to be honest.
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May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^_^! Cream of love! Priceless! *bounces around, giggling like crazy* INCREDIBLE!