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for Yin and Yang

by SkidRow

person Holly T.
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I\'ve been reading. Your doing a very good job, I really enjoy the way you\'ve developed Storm\'s character. However, I\'m not much of a fan of Slash, but it seems like your going to keep Storm and Draco together and for that reason, I will continue reading this great Fanfic. Have a great day and I\'ll be waiting for the next chapter.

Holly
person Mariana
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the story is great ,but in my opinion
it would go much better if...
... she and sirius black get to fuck next chapter.
person Flex
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow.
person amy
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
amazing turn of es. is. i couldn\'t think of anything hotter. keep going, this is great!
person Michelle
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just finished Chap6, really enjoying what you\'ve got so far. Can\'t wait for more.

M
person joe-bob
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are a horable writer and you suck. Don\'t write Mary Sue\'s....Did you know that for every Mary Sue that is written a good auther dies and every good story that is read 2 Mary sues are taken off the internet....So I\'m gonna go read some good stories and hope that yours gets deleted quickly. Have a nice day! ^-^
person amy
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please, please, please update this again. evil place to leave it; it\'s getting so good.
person Sara
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please carry on your story. It\'s getting very interesting!!!
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for the next chapter!!!! Please hurry!!!
person genie
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
a fascinating read. am looking forward to read what will happen next. not once did i feel a need to skip or read faster to get to a more exciting part of the story, well done!