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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I kept hoping you\'d develop the characters. Nope So far you\'ve created one of the most boring Mary Sue\'s I can remember in awhile. Giving her dark hair doesn\'t make her interesting.
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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oooooooh, incredibly hot. love it! but i\'m not sure i really like the story... i\'m afraid i just dont love the idea of Sirius being nasty. i dont mind it in smut, but in a serious story, it kind of gets to me. so i think this is very good work, but i\'ll never truly enjoy the characters i loved from the books being turned bad or made fun of. but i\'m still going to carry on reading, because its very interesting! keep up the good work! and if possible, do you think you could let me know when the next chapter is up? thanks!
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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i luv your stories quickly get them up and running i cant wait that long!! dont u dare stop writing
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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow..... I\'m surprised. I don\'t usually go for Harry/Draco pairings. Takes a lot to get me to like slashy fiction, good job.
-Ella
-Ella
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This plot is really juicy...still waters defintely run deep.
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve really been enjoying your story. I\'m so glad that you updated again! :) I hope that you continueh thh this story for quite a while; it\'s *quite* entertaining. ;) lol... But it\'s rather well-written, too. ;) Go you. I must say that Sirius being a Death-eater came as a big shocker, but you\'re not the first to make him a bad guy ;) you\'d think I\'d be used to that... :-D lol. Can\'t wait to see what you have in store next!
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutely fantastic fic dudette. I know reviews are meant to be all critical and actually help teh writer become better or whatever but i read your AN and decided to reiview just to tell you how awesome i think this fic is. I\'ve never actually read a male slash before cos i\'m more of a fan of femslash and het stuff but for your first go it totally rocked. Heck for your billionth go it rocked!
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August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Really, really Wow. For a first attempt at slash, you did a wonderful job. Keep up the good work. Or I might hafta beat you wif a plastic spork. And that\'s just not kewl...
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August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man this story is the best one i\'ve read in a long time...it\'s got great sex scenes, wonderful story-line, and it\'s really funny, only problem i can see is that it\'s not long enoughou mou must write more....please!!!!!!!!!!!hurry!!!! faster!!!!
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August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know that reviewer..Joe-Bob or whatever...id#38874...well he is stupid...don\'t listen for one minute...one second even to what he says...we was too cheep, and stupid and he didn\'t even put his email...he can\'t be very brave and his opinion shouldn\'t could either...cause he was too chicken to say what he thinks and put an email where you could write back with what you think...the guys an idiot and you shouldn\'t pay attention,...keep writing...it\'s brilliant...