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for Yin and Yang

by SkidRow

person Drianna
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I usually don\'t enjoy OC fic... but this one has me enthralled. k fok forward to the next chapter! Have to appreciate a girl that doesn\'t repress her wants, not to mention gets all the hot boys in the \'verse!
person Dema
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is really getting good. I wonder if she\'ll tell Harry what she knows and who she really is. Please post tons more soon!
person felicia
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really love how the story is coming along... although now all i can do is eagerly anticipate the next chapter. I think the plot is very intriguing and I cant wait to read what happens next... and I love the whole Draco/Harry/Storm relationship. Keep writing... PLEASE!!!
person elementaldeity
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that was good, i read all the chapters at once, Black a Deatheater? so many twists and turns keeps my head spinning, i love it. keep it coming and i mean that both ways of course.
person XxphoenixX
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. Always did love an evil, slutty, pseudo-Mary Sue. Funny thing about yin and yang... one\'s the dark, mysterious, evil and feminine, while the other is light, strong, good and masculine - although each must have a bit of the other. The possibilities are intriguing.
Very well written although the masses of smut and tidbits of plot are starting to get annoying. I actually want to know what\'s going to happen with Storm... will she kill Hermione to prove her cruelty? who she she end up with? ::insert suspenseful music:: Snape really is a perverted bastard, eh? I\'m starting to get a headache from trying to keep track of who is really good and who is really evil... although I do love cheering for the bad guy (or should I say girl?)
person Dark Wanderer
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A quote good fanfic you\'ve written there! Please do continue to do so ^_^. I have to say, that I really do like the way Storm upsets Spape int his fanfic :3. Oh, and it would, BTW be nice indeed if Storm, Harry and possibly Malfoy would give Hermine some, errm, \"education\" at some point in the story. She seems certainly to need a bit of it ;D. And I\'dall all means be very glad indeed if you\'d let the \"trio\" continue their relationship as it is, even through you seem to have hinted at that the relationship between the three of then might end in one way or another at some point. But in any case, you\'ve written a very good fanfic! Ganbatte!
person witchblood
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love it and I hope you keep writing more chapters. I really think teh plot is very good and I look forward to seing what happens.
person mya
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMg! It\'s soo good! you can\'t stop there! Keep on writing!
person Lipchitz
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Omg! It\'s so good! You gotta keep it up! It\'s awesome
person Holly
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey this was good, sorry i didn\'t review eariler but it took you forever and i thought, well other people would review, i check almost everyday i hope it doesn\'t take forever but if it does it\'ll be worth it, have a good halloween and week :)

Holly