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Omg ur storie is awesume y havent u updated *tear*

xxoo

update! please!!!!

This is like.. the ultimate story. I could easily have your children right now. EASILY. Don\'t stop writing it please! xD

first time ive ever felt the need to review... very well done is all i can muster at the moment ;)

hurry up and write more. getting right into this one...wish my sex life was half...ney...one eight as good and prolific.

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Ugh. Horrible.

hhhmmm, not a bad chapter, but i find there is too much plot for my liking! i preferred it as smut. still good work though!

you\'re doing so damn great!
Quickly keep on uploading it as quickl as possible coz I cant wait! and I mean it coz im hook and got nothing else to look forward to. ~_^.
Keep it up please please please please please????