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for In the Dragon\'s Flames

by pixiezombie

person Anonymous
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keep going..very interesting
person SeaBlue
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So glad you\'ve continued with the series--I hopped up and down when I saw that there was a new chapter. Very nicely done. More, please!
person Surfer
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I hope it doesn\'t take you so long to update for the next time. Story suggestions: in the middle of the chapter, Hermione said she was scared of what Draco could do if she ever mad him truly and really mad ~ let\'s see exactly what will happen. Of course, I don\'t know what would make him that mad, he\'s so cool and under control. Maybe Hermione could attempt an escape. Really good story, I know I said that already, but you are an excellent writer and manage to make your stories so enjoyable. I\'m liking the dark theme to this story, very creative.
person Breeze
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh good, I was so afraid you forgot about this story. Yes it is a very dark fic, but that\'s probably why I like it so much. I hope there will be a happy ending though, right? With Draco and Hermione together?
person Automatic Love
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was so hot and steamy ::fans self:: It\'s been a long wait for the second chapter, but definately worth it.

I must say that I was quite skeptical with this story as I generally don\'t take the rape/BDSM category seriously, but I like that this delves deeper into the characters than most rape fics. This chapter has sealed my interest in the progress of the story whereas I was in it solely for the smut in the first chapter. ::cough:: Hope to see number 3 soon!
person Raffy
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! I know I
person deedee
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. It\'s beatifully distrubing:) He\'s like her nightmare and dream come true all in one package. I can\'t wait to read more. Please update soon.
person Margaret
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was bloody amazing work! But oh, I don\'t know if it\'s just Aff.net acting up right now, but the entire 2nd chapter is underlined. Just thought you should know so you could change it--it made it a slightly difficult read. But anyway, I really love your Draco and the whole sadistic turned tender side of him. Is it bad that it\'s weirdly erotic to read BDSM... sometimes even more so than normal smut? lWellWell anyway, great work and hope you update soon. Either story, actually. :P
person WriterLady1031
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that\'s pretty interesting. I\'m usually not into BDSM, but this was very well written. It was interesting to see what they were thinking at vus pus points and how they react to each other. So, I\'m curious to see just how this storyline plays out. Please continue to write more.

person deblovesdragon
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey PixieZombie. Could you edit chapter 2 and undo the underline of your text. It hurts my eyes to read it.
I look forward to reading chapter 2 another time.
Cheers!