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WOW! The part with the deatheaters was really disturbing. But, the story is starting out to be interesting. I really like it:) Actually, all three of your stories are excellent. I hope you continue.

I like this story and where it\'s heading. I think that you made Draco\'s reasoning totally sound, at least for Draco. Please continue, this is really good.

Cheers,
Sing

o my freaking god i need more. that was really great i lovvvve draco so much. your storie made me wet. kinda nasty but hey it was that good. please hurry up and write more i beg you!!!!!

Schuyler D, your review reminded me that I needed to add the \"Do not try this at home\" warning, and I wanted to thank you for that. I put one at the bottom of the chapter, as well as here. I did base what I wrote after some reading accounts that included safety guidelines. Even with what you noted about heart safety, people should know there\'s still a lot involved in safety issues here. For instance, although generally safe on the nipples, it\'s still not supposed to be dragged across the chest. I\'m not writing a manual and the story won\'t contain all the safety info, so don\'t try to use it like one. I\'ve heard of the VW being used for even more dangerous pursuits, including branding, and I would personally agree that it\'s misuse and possible accidents are very scary. Since, this chapter involves a fictional spell to mimic the effect, I\'d consider that a safer adaptation for the wizarding world. Particularly, since it\'s fictional! ;) Remember: \"Do not try this at home!\"

This is an excellent stroy. So far it is really good. Please e-mail me when you update and please update soon.

You were right. This is definitely a dark story. However, it is also extremely well written. I can\'t wait to read more!

That was great! Please update!

I was a bit concerned about the use of a Violet Wand in the story, especially on Hermione\'s nipples as electricity is supposed to be kept below the waist. I learned though that VW\'s are static electricity and are not likely to interefere with or disturb the normal heart rhythm. I just want to make sure readers know that a violet wand is the ONLY electrical toy that can be safely (for the most part) used above the waist. you can\'t use it near the eyes and also it can cause the skin to burn or turn black or be permanently branded. I wouldn\'t use one. They freak me out. Draco is such a bitch but he\'s also somewhat caring. very hard to figure him out.

I have read all three of your Harry Potter stories and I really enjoyed them. I am writing this to encourage you to continue with the Dragon\'s Flames fic. I hate not knowing what\'s going to happen! Keep up the good work!