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for Criminal Ravishment

by Tatiana

person Giova
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
loved this chapter! It did seem just a little fast, but then, it didint bother me too much. I would think a lot of girsl in Hermione\'s situation would be prone to falling in love with a man who helped theter ter such an ordeal. I love this story and am anxiously awaiting more!
person Mogli The Witch
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

this is sooo great!!!

I really like such really dark stories - and this is one of the best I\'ve ever read.

I think Severus has to be very, very troubled - what I mean, is that he is falling in love with a Death Eater\'s victim while having caused such terrible things himself...

And she has to be very afraid of everything in regards of a new relationship - even if she begins to trust Severus. He has to be very cautious with his new feelings for her - after all, Lucius Malfoy told her that he loved her all the time, I don\'t think that she will be able to trust anyone enough to let them come near her (both emotionally and physically)

I really look forward to the next chapters!!!
person Amelia
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story, letting us seeing the slightly softer side of Snape through a lens different to both Hermione\'s and everyone else\'s. Will follow with interest!
person arcee
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think it is a great idea to have her plant flowers..
person Fiery Slut
schedule May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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person Giova
schedule May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter! Please continue!
person Ricky Roo
schedule May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is atereteresting fic, I thought Lucius was very well in character in the beginning. Snape seems rather out of character, but this is your fic so you\'re free to do what you\'d like with him... Break a leg! :)
person Red Writing Hood
schedule May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are definately one of my favorite writers here. I was very happy to see a new chapter. And I love the image of Snape suggng that dick Malfor...I can just see it now...FANTASTIC imagry.

RWH
person arcee
schedule May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very intense stuff .Good writing though.
person good
schedule May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good good good *aah*