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I was wondering if you were thinking of adding Draco interacting with Hermione somehow? Since Lucius abused Hermione, I was thinking that maybe Draco should talk with Hermione. Who knows, maybe he will be nice for a change? Or perhaps treat her like his father did?.....

I am in love with this fic ^_^ I love SnapexHermione ... Meh, I\'m a perv. So will they have sex now, the kind of I-love-you-for-reals sex? Or is this the end? o.O; Pleeeeeaaaaase write more?

OOOOHHH!!! ok I am tired but this story is great anyways.

Great Chapter!

I agree, it is only natural for her to see him as her hero... (Besides, you really managed to describe the kisses in a way... wow!) They are really falling in love with each other, aren\'t they?

But I think it will still be difficult for her... And, excuse my stupid searching for difficulties, could it be that she looks for a kind of substitute for the love she thought she had found with Lucius Malfoy? Naturally not consciously, but she is still recovering from a brainwash and the de-programming is not easy. After all, she thought of Malfoy as of her only love...

I think there will at least be flashbacks, even if she loves Severus Snape dearly there will be moments in which she remembers the abuse through Malfoy. Victims of rape and abusal are traumatized and their greatest problem is that, when it comes to a romantic relationship, they are sometimes afraid of the person they love (and who would never hurt them purposefully). I know someone who was sexually abused by relatives, it happened over 30 years ago and she sometimes is still afraid...

I read somewhere that rape is a kind of killing - the killing of the soul of the victim.

Let\'s see if Sev and Hermione are able to cope with her emotional injuries.

Please go on writing, I hope you aren\'t angry about my writing - it is certainly not a flame!!! I wish I could write like that (but I don\'t think my English is good enough, besides, I would never be able create a really good plot...) I have rarely thought so much like I did about your story... So I hope you will forgive me if I state my doubts that \'Mione will be able to establish a relationship with the Potions master without having some difficulties.

I am very impressed with your story. I was a little worried at the begining, but it has developed very good characterization and *gasp* an actual plot!!! (Although I do not mind PWP all the time, i a n a nice change). I hope you keep going, it is very well written and keeps you involved auriourious about the Hermione\'s character and her reactions to things.

First off, this is an incredible plot idea! Wow! Wish I\'d thought of it myself.

Second, snaps for studying your psychology before attempting this story. Too many authors try to wing it on what they \"think\" should happen in this type of situation, you ally lly nailed it.

Third, consider the choice of wording you use for your charaters. For example, I don\'t think I\'ve ever heard Albus use the words \"Okay\" before, he would say \"alright\" or \"Understand\". Also, to make your diologue more believable, use contractions, most people don\'t always us things like \"that is\" they use \"that\'s\". Just an idea to make your diologe a little bit smoother.

Fourth, thank you so much for writting this! It\'s original, and I love how you managed to get Malfoy into Hogwarts, it\'s VERY believable. If you chose not to write another story after this one, be sure to pass your excellent plot ideas onto other ing ing writters, your story ideas deserve to be written.

Desperate for the next chapter,

Quwinntessa Starber

I\'ll admit that when I first started reading this story I was a little skeptical about the outcome and I wasn\'t too sure that I wanted to continue reading. But I just had to know what happened so I kept reading. I am so happy to know that she is safe with Snape (who doesn\'t love Snape?) Now I cannot wait to see what happens!! Is Snape going to end up with Hermione???

Hallo! When I first started reading this it was so depressing. I found that it was hard to beleive such a strong willed girl like Hermione would fall for the manipulating schemes of Lucius Malfoy. Then I was sad because I wondered if even the happiest ending could make up for what Malfoy had done to her. But her relationship with Severus gives me hope! Good job, I am waiting for the next chp!!!

I love this story. I could not stop reading it. im waiting for more though! :) It has been awhile since ive ready any thing with mr. malfoy in it! May your hand be quick, and the death be fast! Thats when wellw, iw, its going to last. Jen

The story is excellent!!! I hope that you keep planning on having updated.