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Wow, another fantasic chapter. Im glad that Hary and Ron finally accepted Severus as Hermione\'s love, and the lovemaking was wonderfully well written. I look forward to the next chapter...

Loads of kids ahead...I hope...

hehe

RWH

I have just finished reading all nine chapters. I found the story to be very well written and it handled the subject matter well. It provided deep insights into mind control from the victim\'s point of view and clearly illuminated the processes involved in both brainwashing and overcoming it.

I really felt for Hermione and I could understand her confusion and fear. I really enjoyed seeing a more gentle side of Snape. The characterizations were accurate and Malfoy was a complete bastard (excuse my language). It also allowed me to see deeper into Malfoy\'s character (I always have him as a baddie too - would love to kill him off but then I\'d have to find another to take his place. D\'oh!)

If you want to return the favour I have stories at: www.hpfanfiction.nexcess.net/storyline/authors.php?no=810

Malfoy\'s not nice in those either - but I don\'t think he\'s as mean - I could take lessons from you.

Thanks for the reading pleasure.

Rayya

Oh! I didn\'t realise I didn\'t have to have a user name to review! I\'ve been following this fic up for a while, and I have to admit that I\'m obsessed! i love the way that your fic isn\'t the as as everyone else\'s! The whole thing with Lucius was a unique I\'ve never seen before. When Snape started helping Hermione out, I felt a bit betrayed- a little too cliche`- but then how Ses pus pushed her away and they both went back to their lives- it was wonderful. It wasn\'t the stereotypical Sev and Herm instantly shag up- it is kind of a slow progression. My favourite bit has to be the part when Hermione looks up at Snape with big brown eyes in Potions and his heart melts. Aww! Schoenes! Oh, just so you know- I\'m not supposed to be looking at these things, strictly speaking (too many young siblings and strict parents- though I;m old enough, the prunes...) and it MAY ruin my rep if anyone found me out. ;-) I\'d be appreciative if you didn\'t tell anyone I\'ve been here... not that we know the same people.... *shrugs* Nice fic!

Awww...I need to hear a few I love you\'s from those two...Such a bittersweet love connetion...cant wait for more.

RWH

WOW
Really great chapter! Do you plan to become an author?
Or are you one?
Excellent!
Thank you so much for putting this on the internet, so that we can read this

hi love this story ur a really gr8 writer im not normaly a ss/hg fan but i love this story anyway keep writin

Wow That was heavy. I read all nine chapters. I t was so good and sad. Will there be an end? Or was that the end? I hoped to see an ending for Severus and Hermoine.

I figured out how to post a review!!! I just wanted to stress what a wonderful job I think you are doing with this story. I don\'t think it seems rushed at all, it seems like everything is happening at a natural (and tantilizing) pace! Thank you for keeping up with the story... I check up on it several times a day for updates! You are doing an amazing job and you have incredible talent, thank you for all your work!!! ~Leigh~

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Great story that\'s quite addicting! I\'m completely hooked and pairg H/S is always cool.