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June 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story. It\'s been a while since I\'ve really got into a story,but this one reeled me in. Great job, and keep up the good work.
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June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww! I loved that! It\'s not one of those PWPs you always see, where it\'s wham bam thank you ma\'am, but there\'s emotion and love- and I love how Severus is suchentlentleman that he\'ll stop if she wants to. Excellent.
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good premise for a fic. i can see why you have so many reviews. the darkness of it is very realistic. i think that the transitions that Hermione goes through are a little rough, and the way that lucius plants thoughts in her mind a a little choppy, but other than that you\'ve done a great job.
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh
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June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I
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June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW OOOOO I loved it!! Absolutly well written.. Wonderfully put together... YOu must either know alot about these particular issues that were put in this story or you did some magnificant research.. having been a victim myself of such abuse.. I think you wrote it in every detail perfectly.. .. Sounded like you knew exactly what you were talking about and you knew exactly what to write.. Which makes for the best writers. I hope you continue to share you perfect works with us your fans.
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June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As I read the \"Jaws of Death\" scene (as I\'ve come to call it) I couldn\'t help but think that somewhere out there, in this great big world, some poor guy is going to read this fic, and when he gets to the part where Hermoine bites Lucious...he\'s just giong to double over at the meer thought of that happening. In fact I\'m sure that chapter doubled over a lot of poor guys. But on the upside Lucious got exactly what he deserved. Kudo\'s to Hermoine for finally ::cough:: taking a bite out of crime.
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June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, I am afraid that I have lost intt int in your story now :( I was really getting into it but the last few chapters just didn\'t do a thing for me. I just think the whole Severus/Hermione thing isn\'t right. In your summary you say it is with Lucius/Hermione but it has turned into a Sev/Her story and well to be honest it isn\'t my cup of tea. Oh dear I hate to be so negative but I don\'t think I will be reading any furthur.
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May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this was the best three chapters ever!!!
i have been waiting so long for that to happen!!
is this the end?
please dont let it be!
i have been waiting so long for that to happen!!
is this the end?
please dont let it be!
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May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love this story i cant wait to read more of your work