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July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and you are right it is hard knowing people who have been raped and even harder knowing you cant help them. I love smut scenes with Severus and Hermione too! Oh are you a fan of Selena? Your name reminds me of her song.
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July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, excellent ending and tragedy too. So sorry to hear about the girls in your classroom. I had avoided this story because when I first read the beginning it was too familiar to the one I am writing with Lucius and his abuse of Hermione. Since my story has now been completed (not posted of course) in my outlines I felt more free to read this one.
The bitter sweetness of Sev helping her was truly touching. The subject of abuse is a touchy area and you handled it well. Too often I feel that sometimes fanfic allows people to act out naughty little fantasies (nothing wrong with that of course) but when it comes to non consensual sex, there is reprecussions, emotional damage. It doesnt go away and it doesnt turn out happy all the time. I can attest to this as I intern on the mental health ward at the local hospital. I can safely say that three out of every five adults (we do not take children) reveal they were sexual abused as a child. Emotional scarring is real.
Enough of my soapbox.
Loved the ending, especially Lucius getting his. And of course the intimacy between Sev and Hermione.
(And darn it I dont have a husband to take care of these things after I read lol)
Cheers Andrian
The bitter sweetness of Sev helping her was truly touching. The subject of abuse is a touchy area and you handled it well. Too often I feel that sometimes fanfic allows people to act out naughty little fantasies (nothing wrong with that of course) but when it comes to non consensual sex, there is reprecussions, emotional damage. It doesnt go away and it doesnt turn out happy all the time. I can attest to this as I intern on the mental health ward at the local hospital. I can safely say that three out of every five adults (we do not take children) reveal they were sexual abused as a child. Emotional scarring is real.
Enough of my soapbox.
Loved the ending, especially Lucius getting his. And of course the intimacy between Sev and Hermione.
(And darn it I dont have a husband to take care of these things after I read lol)
Cheers Andrian
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June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love that chapter. and no, it definitely wasnt rushed the way that hermione suddenly loved severus. the whole story is great and i must say that i have not been able to predict much of what will happen in future chapters..and that\'s saying something since i can predict correctly for many books and movies. As a side note, i have read all of your stories but one, and i will read that one the next chance i get!
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June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...i was in tears...this was a wonderful story, i really appreciate your work. I too am a victim of sexual abuse and know exactly how Hermionie feels and have had that same problem running to older men for support - a great peice of work:P
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June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on a good story I throughly enjoyed it ..
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June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Corazon,
I have always loved your writing. This was a very emotional ride for me. Being a survivor of abuse myself I could relate to most of what Hermione was going through. It helped that she had someone to coach her through her turmoil. I wish I had someone like Severus during my trials...Thanks for writing this...it was a great and emotional story.
RWH
I have always loved your writing. This was a very emotional ride for me. Being a survivor of abuse myself I could relate to most of what Hermione was going through. It helped that she had someone to coach her through her turmoil. I wish I had someone like Severus during my trials...Thanks for writing this...it was a great and emotional story.
RWH
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June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
excellent story....I found the sexual abuse a little intense and disturbing, but i stuck to it and eventually was able to enjoy a good read...as always your writing was excellent.
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June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a really good story. I loved the development of snapes tenderness towards Hermione. It was a difficult and yet touching story to read. Having survivored a childhood of sexual abuse, my boyfriend is helping me now deal with the pain. It was beautiful to read how much severus loved and wanted to protect Hermione. I feel that - know I know that - that is is how my boyfriend must feel.
Thank you for writing this story, you don\'t know wit hit has done for me.
Piggie.
Thank you for writing this story, you don\'t know wit hit has done for me.
Piggie.
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June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, i have spent almost 2 and a half hours reading this story, and i must say, it is a million times better than i thought it would be. Even though i know what a wonderful writer you are, you surprise me everytime. i\'m sorry to hear that you are having surgery. Is it on your ankle? surely not. Are you gonna be okay? I hope so. YOu are my favorite author on ff.net, whispers, and here, and i couldn\'t bto tto think you were being hindered by surgery. There are a few questions i have though. Ok, why did you choose the name of the tower to be Priapusum (did i spell it right?) Have you read the story, the Fourth Unforgivable? because in that story, the fourth unforgivable is Priapus, and i obviously don\'t have to explain to you what it means. I am so very pleased with this story. BTW, did you know i updated my story? Email me before your surgery. Or i\'ll worry about you. Ok well, it\'s almost 2a.m. here. i\'ve been reading since 11:30. lol bye. Potions Mistress
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June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The lies that Lucuis said on this chapter got me sooooo mad!
I was kinda surprised w/ Draco
I was kinda surprised w/ Draco