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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was alright in the long run. Now I usually listen to music while I read and I heard this song that I though just went so well with this story, it's called 'Innocent'. Here are the lyrics:
Satin, you know where I lay,
Gently I go, into that good night.
All our loves get complicated,
Serves from pleasures overrated.
Never armed our souls,
For what the future would hold.
When we were innocent.
Innocent...
Angels, lend me your might,
Forgive all my lies, to get just one ride.
All those colors long since faded,
And all our smiles are confinscated,
Never were we told, that we'd be bought and sold,
When we were innocent.
Yhea...
Yhea this prayer, has brought me tonight,
Whisper down that line, you still ain't got it right. (I think that's what the line is)
All confessions long since faded,
All this shit is contemplated (I think that's what the line is)
Never did we know, What the future would hold,
Or if we'd be bought and sold,
no oh, no oh,
When we were innocent,
Innocent...
When we were innocent...
I'm really not going to go into a long explaination as to why i thought this song went with the story because i'm just lazy.
Sakura
Satin, you know where I lay,
Gently I go, into that good night.
All our loves get complicated,
Serves from pleasures overrated.
Never armed our souls,
For what the future would hold.
When we were innocent.
Innocent...
Angels, lend me your might,
Forgive all my lies, to get just one ride.
All those colors long since faded,
And all our smiles are confinscated,
Never were we told, that we'd be bought and sold,
When we were innocent.
Yhea...
Yhea this prayer, has brought me tonight,
Whisper down that line, you still ain't got it right. (I think that's what the line is)
All confessions long since faded,
All this shit is contemplated (I think that's what the line is)
Never did we know, What the future would hold,
Or if we'd be bought and sold,
no oh, no oh,
When we were innocent,
Innocent...
When we were innocent...
I'm really not going to go into a long explaination as to why i thought this song went with the story because i'm just lazy.
Sakura
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for writing another wonderful story.. Go Hermione and Severus...
Cheers, Sonia
Cheers, Sonia
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was truly one of the best that I have ever read. Your writing skills amaze me. You know someone is a truly fabulous writer if they can captivate you in their story. Good job.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! this was an amazing story! it brought me to tears! you have a wonderful gift!
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had to stop at chapter 2. It\'s an alright story, but as Harry Potter fanfiction it falls flat. I suggest you speak to someone about characterisation. Keep up the good work, though.
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are an amazing writer. You use words to paint vivid images and scenes. You spin your tales like finely made silk. thank you. I have read Forbidden Love on Ashwinder. May whatever God you believe in continue to bless you for caring so much about your students.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story this is th 2nd story of your i have read and this one was every every moving i hope you still read your review and thank you for another great story i hope to read more and thank you and well bye for now .
angel
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Best damn story I\'ve ever read. You have to pat yourself on the back!