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God, that is why I hate Lucius, he is such a jerk. Well, soon, I hope, Snape to the rescue!! Oh yeah, how come dumbledore doesn\'t see any of this??

Wow! I am really impressed by your writing! You are definitly creative and very detailed oriented! You can really carry on a good plot and make it believable. I am really getting into this story and we can see how Lucius is manipulating her for his own pleasures. He is trying to control and dominate her and Hermione is naivnaive to understand the games he is using on her. He is trying to isolate her from everyone and brainwash her into thinking that nee needs him. I could definitly see this happening. Total psychological mind control. I can\'t wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work! :D

I hope hermione is going to get Lucius back in a big way in the end! I like this fic a, th, though it is almost painfull for me to see a smart girl be so stupid. I know it happens in real life all the time, though, which makes this story even more disturbing for me. Please tell me that Snape is going to get involved soon! Positive re-enforcement isn\'t his strong suit, but right now I think Hermione needs all the help she can get. Nice, long chapter, this. I hope you\'ll update soon!

Oh, yes, I think this story is going to be great! You are a very talented writer. Please post more soon!

This is a really interesting begining, I do hope you update soon!

Not a big fan of Het...but I\'m looking forward to reading more of this. I am a fan of noncon, as long as it\'s written well and from a good psych POV. The story\'s interesting, to say the least.