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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good!! I\'m hoping Hermione will blurt it out out to Severus. Lucius is such a bastard but a beautiful one. I can\'t wait to see what happens next.
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
On my way to work, so i don\'t have much time to comment, but wanted to let you know I read and liked this chapter. Please don\'t have her defend that creep! I know she probably will, but I can still hope.
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have done a really good job here, displaying your talent clearly.
You have captured a very real situation, intounreunreal environment.
You have made it not only believable but, a riveting story. Brilliant!!
Ivy
You have captured a very real situation, intounreunreal environment.
You have made it not only believable but, a riveting story. Brilliant!!
Ivy
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I luv your story very much.It has a mixture of suspense and love.its a great combination.Please update soon.Pretty prety pleaz.
Anyway,I hope that when you are done with this story,you continue to write.You are an excellent writer and I hope to see more from you in the future.
~Your fellow author,
~FallenAngel
Anyway,I hope that when you are done with this story,you continue to write.You are an excellent writer and I hope to see more from you in the future.
~Your fellow author,
~FallenAngel
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty disturbing but I enjoy it since I
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I am enjoying this story already! Please keep updating, I am eager to read more! :D
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, i found myself getting really mad in this chapter! I \'ve met a few guys who used Lucius\' reasoning. Plus Snape had to be such a total jerk. I still think this is quite good, though. Please update soon!
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This is very well written! It just turns me on when a Malfoy is seducing Hermione! Update soon and make the sex scenes really