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for Adamo Fidelitas

by pixiezombie

person mira
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
will you ever update again????? Your story is so awesome and it\'s so dissapointing to end where it is. Please dont leave it!
person Jessica
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww. I love this fic. If you update it, please e-mail me and let me know. Awesome job!
person Alexia Riddle
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!! I
person jess
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a good fic, but its getting a bit fluffy and romantic i\'m afraid! would like some hardcore sex next time, please?
person wren
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I greatly enjoyed this particular chapter. I love how you portrayed the Malfoys and Draco\'s obsession with pleasing his father. The one part where Narcissa askes, \"The father or the son?\" I found not only very enlightening to her character but wonderful in how simple it was to sum up her feelings about their personalities and their relationship with eachother.

I truely love this and I am glad that I came across it!!!! *smiles*
person gabby
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I looove this story but I was wondering if you had updated/completed it on another archive/yahoo group. I would love to know where the rest of the story is! Please email me. Gabby
person Neko-Xan
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE. Pretty pretty please? ^^ This story is so good, I almost wanted to cry when Draco was being such an ass with Hermoine (and with good reason too), and just to see her suffer like that.. I don\'t know how to describe this story other than sayng EXCELLENT.
person Elayne
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH!!!! You can\'t just leave it like that! They\'re just now starting to acknowledge their feelings for each other! Please, please, please update soon.
person Jen
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Only just finished the first chapter but I do plan on finishing the whole thing. Just wanted to say I love your fresh approach. Rather than them using each other and falling in love by accident as they do like in most fics, you\'ve decided to most tastefully use a lust spell. It works out perfectly the way you\'ve written it so far! I love the part where Draco gets Mione all hot and bothered then leaves her there in the hallway--that\'s so him! Well, I\'m off to the second chapter now. Thanks for giving me one of the few good Draco/Hermione fics online to read!!!!
person Brooke
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was an amazing story. so far. i love it. i was laughing and sighing and imagening and daydreaming. i thought about this story even when i wasn\'t reading it and i\'d like you to know that while is was working on some school work i started to type your story instead of my essay because i couldn\'t get it out of me head. this is brilliantly written and excelently researched. you made it a believable story and you managed to not on\'y have Draco and HErmione have to have sex you also brought in their personality and their stubburness and their pride. so that they were willing to risk insanity rather then touch someone they considered their enemy. and i\'d liekt o say YES to Luna and that i knew she and Ron were going to get together from the moment you mentioned her. i had a feeling. now i\'m really worried about Ginny finding out and i flipped down to the end of the chapter to see if there was any confrontation before rereading it. i would love to be put on your yahoo update group list. my email is dangerousjah_love @ yahoo.com (no spaces i just don\'t trust these reviews to allow me to have my email in them). Once again excellent story.
Brooke