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for Adamo Fidelitas

by pixiezombie

person rain
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i really love this fic. It\'s one of my favs. Please keep up the good work.
person SchuylerD
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter. I love Draco/Hermione and his teasing of her is delciously evil. You portray everyone in class so well -- they\'re all in character and I can really visualize the room, the hallways, etc. I am worried about Snape, though. Is he going to figure it out? And are Hermione and Draco going to throw each other down and shag each other rootten eventually? (hoping, hoping!) This is wonderful, please keep it up and add more soon. It\'s hellish having to wait!
person Stained Lips
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ie the this, and can\'t wait for more! Keep up the good work! :-)
person SchuylerD
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Again, a beautiful job! Benedick the Eternal Bachelor -- nice touch! And the last two lines are so perfect. I\'m enjoying this so much, I can\'t wait for you to update. I hate harping on you about it but it is difficult getting into the story then having to wait. It\'s like those TV shows where at the end it says TO BE CONTINUED. The words of Television DOOM, I tell you! :) Please do update soon. I hope your muse is healthy and excited!
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Two questions: Where did you get Testostrone poisioning from? It seems like my husbands suffers from that every once in awhile! And two: Can you post another chapter right... RIGHT NOW?!?! I need a little snogging ;) And I love that ROn is so annoying *GRIN*

Thanks for the WONDERFUL story!
Karena Elizabeth
person gin
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. How often are u going to update?
person Spoonie
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVED the Bridget reference. I laughed out loud when I saw that, much to the chagrin of mommaommate who was asleep on the sofa at the time HAHA. Oh well, still enoying it.
person HPfreak18
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks up the e-mail and the update. Good chapter though I have to admit I feel bad for Ron. I think Hermione should tell him what happened. I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Belladonna
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great job I love the story. And you are correct about the Helios apple - called the Apples of the Hesperides they are located at the very end of the world, where Atlas holds up the earth. A snake is coiled around the tree that grows the golden apples. One of the Labors of Hercules was to obtain three of the golden apples of the Hesperides. Good luck with the story.
- Belladonna
person Ti\'Anna
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot, it just needs one more chapter.