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This is very quickly becoming my favorite het fic. I love everything about it. Your writing, creativity, and characterizations are all just brillant. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!

uh....i know this has nothing to do with this story...but since you update this one so much i thought you\'d read the reviews here more than on ur other story \"in the dragon\'s flames\"......i was jus wonng ing if you were ever gonna update tat story.....i really want to know wat happens

Yeah, bay-bee!! Am enjoying tand and am waiting for more, please!

Good chapter, thanks for writing. I am glad they finally took the next step!eah!eah!

Most excellent! please continue it soon.

I love your story. It\'s my favorite. I wonder if Snape gave them their little push on purpose. I guess they just needed a reason to go through with it. The sex scene was very wwritwritten. I can\'t wait to find out what happens next. Please writee soe soon.

yay! fantabulous. want more.

Wonderful story with an extremely cunning plot direction! I love the fact that you have managed to write erotica without resorting to gratuity.

You\'re right about the vagina -- I mean I\'ve never felt ANYTHING from those \"Ribbed for her Pleasure\" condoms. But at the same time I can feel ejaculation about 95% of the time. The penis pulses, and that I can definitely feel. I don\'t feel a \"splash\" or anything though, so if that\'s the myth you\'re shattering, it\'s good that you did. I have felt warmth, though. I think sometimes people couple the pulplusplus the warmth and just say they can feel the semen \"hitting\" their cervix when tliteliterally can\'t differentiate that exact sensation from mere temperature or pressure as the shaft pulses. But yeah, I DO feel it when a guy comes. This sounds like an interesting discussion for my live journal! Interesting chapter, too. I am also wondering just how far inside the vagina the hymen is. How far can one put their finger inside? When I was a virgin I could use tampons with no problem, and when I first had sex, I still had my hymen. Now that it\'s gone, i\'m not sure where exactly it WAS. LOL!

I found your story under \"latest\" and am heartily glad for it. The premise of a love/lust potion as a start point for Dr/H has been explored, but it really is very difficult to find one of your writing calibre. This is especially so, in the light of your ability to keep both Draco and Hermione in character. Having read all 5 chapters at a go, I am quite sure that you will do the genre justice in the continuation of the story. I really enjoyed the way Snape figured out the situation that the protangonist got themselves into, as well as how Dumbledore handled the situation. After all, there really isn\'t much that they could do without the Helio Apples, now could they? *grins*

The consummation of Draco and Hermione in Chapter 5 was well-written. It is apt that Draco chose the Dragon\'s Keep for Hermione\'s deflowering. Here\'s hoping Hermione will get to \"keep the Dragon\". heh.

I\'m looking forward to the next chapter. Might it be too much to ask if you\'d email me when you upload Chapter 6?

Campy Capybara