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for Adamo Fidelitas

by pixiezombie

person thedecembrist
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... that was just ... i lack the proper words to describe it. your story is just sensational. truly sensational. it is the first time in the history of my long-standing career of fanfic reader that a story has ever invoked such a response from me. i absolutely adored your quidditch match! can u believe i was gripping the edge of my chair in anticipation? and when draco was going straight down.. down.. down.. i was like \'NOOO\' and had to shield my eyes with a hand for a moment before realising that duh, you need ur eyes to read the rest... needless to say, i felt rather sheepish.. and then the part where draco bravely climbs up to the top box... wow.. that was beautifully written.. u nearly brought tears to my eyes..ade ade me want to sob openly.. hermione\'s reaction throughout the entire the match, and esp. at the top box at the end of the match, made me want to sob openly... even snape! i can\'t believe what u wrote abt snape.. so well-written and so humourous at the same time! i love all the sex scenes.. truly erotic and perfectly well-played out... esp. love the latest one with all the sweets! it was so delicious, if i may say so myself. i truly love the way you\'ve been writing draco and hermione.. they\'ve been quite realistic and believable and my stomach is fluttering with anticipation to when they\'re really gonna fall in love! i feel they are already starting... aren\'t they? the entire story plays out so fluently it\'s like i can see it all so clearly in my mind\'s eye.. like i\'m in a cinema watching the movie of ur story. truly fantastic. pls do update... i\'ll be eagerly waiting! PS:this, i think, is the longest review that i\'ve written, ever! :)
person Jules
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pixie:

Where for art thou?
I love this story but it hasn\'t been updates for ages. Please don\'t forsake this!

Jules
person Victoria
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
Where\'s the next cer??er???? I am dying to read it!!! This one is one of my D/Hr favorites...please please please give us a Chapter 10!
person anonimo
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
im going to die if you dont put a new chapter please
person AkuNeko
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow! this was a really good story. I went through a whole bunch of things to finish it, and it was all worth it. Say, when i read that bit when Hermione and Draco go on their trysts, i wondered about: the Marauder\'s Map. Wouldn\'t Harry see the two dots in the same room and not suspect something? Hey, maybe thats how ... nm.
anywhos, kudos on your story!

=^o^=
person Rhiannon
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What that\'s it...that\'s a terrible cliffy!!! Who wrote that on her wall...i mean you can just end it there...please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!hurry hurry!!!!!!

person Apollonia
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is, by far, one of the BEST DAMN Draco/Hermione fics out there! I have printed this baby up so I can read it in cast my computer crashes or whatever. Please update this story soon. I want to see what happens next. The drama is so intense as well as the love between our favorite Slytherin and favorite Gryffindor.
person Serena
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I just finished it.... plz add another chapter faster...thanks
person SnapeLover
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story but it\'s been so long since the last chapter!!! Sincerely hope all is well, but please consider updating this lovely fic - thanks!!!
person dinabugg
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story! You have an excellent writing style and excellent character development. Yay you you!