rate_review Reviews

I really love this story. I pretty much never write reviews for these things- but yours is exceptional. For one thing, I am impressed with the way that you have continued to represent the characters in the spirit of the original author. The actions and dialogue that you have written are so true to what they would have done in JKR\'s hands. Thank you for that. I also love that, even though the story is erotica, it still retains that very sweet and angst-ridden dynamic that teenage love is all about. The fact that Hermione is cruel but not mean is so true to the age, don\'t you think?

The only thing that I am missing is Ron\'s deadpan remarks- i.e.: \"She has really got to get her priorities in order.\" But he is too busy being all mature and nice at this point. And, anyway, after reading this much of your story, I can\'t any more imagine Hermione with anyone BUT Draco...

I finally got around to making the minor tweaks that I mentioned at the end of chapter 9, to bring the earlier chapters into line better with OotP. There is one more tweak that I might make later for our darling us, us, but I really haven\'t found a good spot to impart that OotP information sooner.

Thanks
Pixyzombie

wicked! man, that was extraordinarily cruel. man, and i thought nothiouldould top off the last chapter! my mouth just hung open forever after she petrified him. my god. wow. im just totally mind blown by that-thats possibly the most shocking moment in fanfic history...well, at least for what i could remember at the moment. and then of course there was the exclaimation of \"holy fuck\" after he wasnt in the closet no longer.
ahhhh..you know what\'s amusing? while i was in the shower this morning i was actally thinking of this fic and how sad it was that it seems to be another terribly great fic lost to abandonment. luckily that wasnt the case and i got to read and revive my intense love for this fic. that chapter was beyond worth the wait and now ill have to suffer the 2 weeks until the next. though my suspicions that it was snape who set him free...ooohhh do we get to relive the moment? ahhh if it was snape, i could just picture the amusement and the -what\'s the word- to granger for the audacity to do such a cruel thing. ^____^ man, i cant wait. and i more than thank you.

This is one of the most delightfully smutty fics out there! I was rather sad, thinking you\'d abandoned it and was so happy to find that you\'re continuing with the story. Most authors who write this sort of thing have no talent with regard to storytelling, but this is definitely the exion.ion. Beyond the eroticism, there is a good story here and I\'m anxious to find out where this is leading. And good formionmione for putting Malfoy in his place, LOL. Please update soon.

Okay, read it. Another brilliant, enjoyable chapter. Wonder where you\'re going with the \'attack\' on Hermione, hmm? Is it Death Eaters... or a school prank? And re: your cliffhanger -- poor Draco, but I\'m glad he finally got some, heh heh!

Oh man! You\'re evil! hehe... I can almost feel Draco\'s \'frustration\'.*winks* Where the hell did he go? I don\'t feel good about his sudden disappearance. I hope he\'s just hiding somewhere to surprise Hermione and give her a taste of her own medicine.*nasty lusty grin*

I can not believe it.... OMG you updated... you really updated. Think im going to die from shock.

This is anzingzing story. This is one of the best Draco/Hermione fics around. It has everything. I love the way you characterize the chracters. I mean you wrote Draco amazing... it makes him human in a cutely bad type of way. and Hermione shes becoming stronger with the way that Draco brings out the lioness in her.

And the Sex scenes... omg. i mean the birthday present to himself and the candy... speechless.ok one word HOT.

I wondered when you were going to update or if you were just leaving it as it is. Its good to see that your back.

Poor draco... ndernder if Pansy found him..ewww.

I thought that it was ginny at first that found out about them but then i would think that its Ron

Well i cant wait for the next chapter.

Do you know what?!? I haven\'t even READ the update (ch. 10) yet; I\'m reviewing just to day THANK YOU for updating my alltime favorite fic!!!!!!!!!!!! I was soooo hoping you hadn\'t forgotten this story (alas, as other writers have done from time to time). I will give an actual review when I read it, but suffice it to say for now that I\'m tremendously grateful for whatever you\'ve written. Thanks again!!!

OH shit... That\'s not cool! Update soon so i can find out what happened to Draco! OH! By the way... the last time Draco and Hermione had sex... I didn\'t hear/read a contraception charm being performed... hmmm.... didn\'t know if you noticed it of if it meant nothing... Update soon!