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for Adamo Fidelitas

by pixiezombie

person deedee
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for both of them. Poor Hermione, she\'s going to have a harder time if he meant what he say. After all, she was only in this mess because of the two idiots. Otherwise she would not have had a relationship with Draco at all. I think Draco was a bit too harsh. I mean she did finally give him head. Isn\'t that one of the things he wanted she to do to him? But I could understand his feelings of hurt when she said \'I hate you\'. Even if she didn\'t mean it, it still hurts to hear it. I hope he forgives her. But, it would be fun to see what they\'re going to do for relief in the mean time. Draco is so going to eat his words. He\'s going to need her. I can already see the angst coming. I can\'t wait. Please write more.

Oh yeah, I almost forgot to ask, does Ron still want to be with Hermoine? Or is there going to be a Ron and Luna? And you never mentioned who that person was that saw them leaving the classroom that one night.
person Brian
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you need to do a fic about Luna and Ron or something, or at least with Luna, she seems like an interesting subject to write about.
person Brian
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
bout time you got the next chappie up, that wa an AWFUL cliffhanger...and i loved it!!! Keep the chappies coming, you\'re an me wme writer.
person HPfreak18
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, things are really messed up between these twI amI am looking forward to your next chapter soon I hope!
person Linis
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is sooo sad. I really hope Draco forgives Hermione. I mean it was an accident. And he will need her if the potion carries on otherwise every one is gonna ask questions especially his daddy. Just one question where\'s pansy? wouldn\'t she have more to say on the fact that Draco got really angry at the mudblood. and wouldn\'t she tease her about her room getting trashed.... unless of course it was pansy how did thashiashing.

LINIS
person Jessica
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, can\'t wait to read more!
...puts me in mind of the smashing pumkins song, Ava adore...
person SnapeLover
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Draco!! Funny, though, I never saw him as such a victim through the years, lol. Good development and writing... wonder what\'ll happen next?! How long will it take him to forgive Hermione? (Wow, WILL she be forgiven? That was pretty nasty!) Many, many thanks for such a quick update. I\'m really enjoying this story as per usual.
person sushified
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! You can\'t do this to me. You can\'t make them hate each other, or at least not Draco hate Hermione, because we know she doesn\'t hate him. I hope you let it turn out alright. Man oh man.
person Ernie
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I like it even better than the real Harry Potter books!
person RaffyV
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I feel awful not only for Draco but for Hermione as well