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In a previous review I stated that I was happy that Hermione put Draco in his place, but once I read how he\'d suffered under the hex, I felt really badly for him. The past two chapters have been heartbreaking because it\'s obvious that they care about each other, but are much too angry to admit it. I love that this is Smut with Plot . . . it\'s so rare and not only that, but the relationships between the chaers ers are so in keeping with canon. This is very well written and I\'m incredibly happy that you\'ve picked it up again. I can\'t wait to see what happens next.

Wow.

What a wonderful story. The plot is delightfully well thought out. The characterization is right on target. I absolutely love this story! I think it\'s one of the best fanfics I\'ve ever read! The sex scenes were BEAUTIFUL! What a clever use of wizard sweets!! I\'m truly impressed with your story, Pixyzombie! Its fresh and well written...I just can\'t praise you enough!

Well Done!
-Yvii

That was very touching, Pixy.*sniffs* This chapter got me all misty-eyed. It was terrible seeing Hermione suffer so much while Draco was being so stubborn and was obviously trying to make her jealous. It

Awww! Draco/Hermione moments PLEASE?!?!?!

Sounds like this will be something they can resolve. why should Draco trust Hermione? But he also needs to understand why she did that. Please make everything alright... AND GET RID OF THAT PAIN POTION!! LOL

I think you did a great job in this chapter resolving their conflit. You did a much better job than I ever dreamed possible. You drew out and gave a valid reason for Draco being able to torment Hermione like he did and I can see Herm being so desperate... I am so not saying this the way I want to. Any ways the gist of it is that I enj the the chapter and you left me wanting more without a doubt.

awesome!! I\'ve been following this story from the beginnign and i LOVE it. Please, please, please update, man!!

Ahhh.... nooo.... Must have more to read. *sob*

I love this story. It\'s truly amazing. One of the best i\'ve read in ages! Keep updating

oh my goodness *runs around pulling hair out*
what are they doing to each other, what was Hermione thinking?
What is Draco thinking, please, oh please, let them work things out.
He was so gentle with herowinowing more of him than with anyone else,
why did she have to be so bitter?
Thanks.
the cat