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for Adamo Fidelitas

by pixiezombie

person Apollonia
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How very touching! I\'m glad that after an all-out girl fight and several annoying owls that Draco decided to finally speak to Hermione. And I\'m really glad that he forgave her. Excellent job! Please update again soon!!!!
person beachLEMON
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Great story -- as always. I especially adore this chapter because Draco finally gets a chance to STOP blaming everything he feels towards Hermione on the lust potion. Plus, it\'s funny as hell that he said he\'d kill her if she made him \'permanently damaged.\' Love that. I\'m so happy that you updated this rapidly and please, please update soon! I check this story first all the time when I get on AFF.net. This has such good plot and character development!

You\'re really, really talented. This is the one story that I always feel compelled to review on every chapter. Others, I just read and wait until they update but this one is too good to pass it up without the proper encouragement towards the author. Go you!

Update soon!
person Laerai
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lord. That was so busy. So full of emotions and events. Definitely not a thrown together chapter. It shows and it was fantastic. I\'m very much anxious to read more of the Helios Apple. And the Ball should be... interesting to say the least. Great job!
person Sharon
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12 is just brilliant! I always love getting online and finding a new chapter for AF.
person Jules
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow -- As I read the confrontation scene between Hermione & Draco all I could do is hold my breath. The emotions ran so high & fierce. I wanted to cry for both of them. Also, I love seeing how Dumbledore is manipulating the D&Hr relationship. He\'s being so cagey!

The depth you bring to Draco & Hermione is tremendous. I apprecite your faithfullnto cto cannon while maintaining their growth andractraction. Interesting how Draco is the first one to realize that something more than the lust potion is afoot.

I look forward to reading about the ball and the Helios Apple. Update soon please ;D
person arbitrary
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh, it\'s just too much! okay, so now they\'re reconciledrt ort of) but what about the trust issue? I\'m sure Hermione will think of something to win it back... by the way, loved the owls. what a great idea! and the inclusion of the WWN story... brilliant!
update soon (well, actually, update when you\'re ready... I just hope it isn\'t too long)
person Kiristeen
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh! Thank goodness! I was truly despairing after that last chapter. ::whimpers in remembrance:: This chapter was great! Lovee owe owls, and Draco\'s eventual exasperated \'defeat\'. LOL Her rant at him was great too -- that whole trophy room scene, in fact, I loved.


Kiri -- eagerly waiting to see how this unfolds.
person GeekGoddess
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am one of the biggest haters of Draco/Hermione fanfiction, but I was bored one day and decided to read your story.....I was stunned by how good it was...I am still checking daily to see if this story has been updated.....your are an amazing storyteller.....I found myself holding my breath when Draco was yelling at Hermione........and this last chapter made me cry....please please make things ok between Draco and Hermione....I suspect that they love each other.
person jenn
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated. I just love this st Too Too many times authors make Draco so OOC. I know it is hard to get Hermione and Draco together without taking them out of character, but you have done a wonderful job at keeping them true to their characteristics and having a plausible relationship. Usually I wait until a fic is complete before reading, but I couldnt resist this one. I cannot wait for more. Update soon!
person genrou
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
(you know its kinda weird writing this review in nothing but underwear having come straight from the bath and thus being super warm and wetish but super dry and having Duran Duran\'s \"girls on film\" playing in the background) well anyway i prininted out the previous chap and this one to read while i end a d a nice bath but once i finished, i so had to get out of the tub, ignoring what else i had planned to read so that i could come straight heere to write a review. my god, this fic is just absolutely brilliant and i cant help but get comepletely absorbed into it. man, i just absolutely love this fic. and that catfight was definately hilarious as was the organized cheese. poor ron, but soon he\'ll relize what\'s infront of him so its he\'s okay. i so wonder what\'s to happen at the ball and if other people besides pansy realize more of what\'s going on. and of course that trophy room scene was just so sweet and heartbreaking. but things are somewhat mended ad i cant wait for whats to occur next. thanks and please, please write more soon.