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for Adamo Fidelitas

by pixiezombie

person lady of Shalotte
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Spectacular! Excellent writing. I just found this story and its great.
person ghypscee
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, i love this story. i hope you are going somewhere with the mudblood threat soon. impressive story so far; i hope you update soon! thanks!
person Lisa
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! I was honestly rather afraid that you had abandoned this fic. I liked how angsty this chapter was. I actually really like the conflict going on between the two and I really and wondering what their relationships going to be like after they both drink the potion. I\'m pretty sure that the expectations put on draco by his father cough*joindeatheaters*cough could put them in some pretty extreme and interesting situations. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Pleaseate ate again soon!
person Apollonia
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am SO GLAD that you\'ve updated! It has been so long since you\'ve done anything with this story. And believe me I\'ve been waitingL ExL Excellent chapter.
person Anon
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story...this is great. I hope there is more!
person The Blue Lady
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 ~
Another AWESOME chapter! Your writing is *sin*sational! It thrills us so when you update, and then we can\'t wait for the next one! It\'s an addiction, like the potion itself. So, Draco is getting a \"wee bit\" nervous and doesn\'t understand his guilty conscience over what he has done to Hermione. And is more disturbed over his \"protectiveness\" of h You You write Draco\'s lines with such zest! \"You, Ginger Weasel\"...\"fleeting pleasure of dropping her off the Astronomy Tower\"...\"make a Hufflepuff cry... you already beat me to that\"...\"break into the booby hatch\". Very funny stuff! Your writing is so entertaining.

I loved it when Hermione passed out into Draco\'s arms and as she \"stirred, and Draco could feel herpariparing to snuggle into him in her unconscious state\" with all the prefects watching in the Great Hall. Priceless, that would have been! They would have really thought she was *mad*. Enjoyed Luna and her lunacy!

That Draco can really work his *magic* with Hermione\'s sexual needs! \"Try to keep it down\" - how funny! :D

Bring on the girls getting ready, the Friendship Ball and Draco and Hermione\'s trip to Greenhouse 5! Thanks for all you do Pixiezombie!

~~ The Blue Lady ~~

person layla
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for the next chapter, hope you get it posted soon.
person deblovesdragon
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! YOU UPDATED!
I was actually thinking about your fic the other day. While pondering potions and the like.
Please don\'t let such a long space of time go between chapters again. Love the fic.
Thanks PixieZombie! Cheers!
person JennaSlytherin
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So worth the wait!! I love this fic sooo much! Definatly the BEST D/Hr stroy out there!!!!
person rubberduck
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhh, finally the next chapter. i was worried this was a story that just fell right off the face of the web. so glad to see it hasn\'t. i understand how hard it is to get something written sometimes. here\'s hoping it gets easier for you. this was one of the first fics i read once i discovered this site and i got to read all 12 chapters then. i was blown away, but too intimidated to review at the time. i\'m no longer so shy. this is one of the best fics out there and i\'m amazed at the level of characterization in there. you have brought the characters to life and it\'s really fun to see where they go. i can not wait for more. but i\'ll try to be patient. lol