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One of my favorite aspects of this fic is the wonderful characterization of Draco and Hermione. Unlike the typical hormone-driven teenagers, they are more rounded out in terms of personality despite their sexual situation. The plot itself is an insightful look into the effects of playing upon the most primal needs of humans, that is of sex. I hope you update more frequently; looking forward to it.

One of my favorite aspects of this fic is the wonderful characterization of Draco and Hermione. Unlike the typical hormone-driven teenagers, they are more rounded out in terms of personality despite their sexual situation. The plot itself is an insightful look into the effects of playing upon the most primal needs of humans, that is of sex. I hope you update more frequently; looking forward to it.

I\'m ashamed to admit that I\'ve been neglecting my duty as a fan of your work by not reviewing as often as I should. Let me just say I truly love your work and check for update every time I\'m anywhere near a computer. I look forward to the next chapter soon.

I\'ve read many adult fan fics and many Draco/Hermione fanfics. Of all those I\'ve read, this is the best. You have plot development, Everyone is perfectly in character, nothing\'s too easy, it\'s perfect. I started reading this last night and was disappointed when I reached the end of chapter 13 this morning. I\'m usually a very harsh critic, but I can find little wrong with this story. Thank you for writing such a marvelous piece of fan fiction.

-M. Dzi

this chappie was \"bloody brilliant\" like all the others!! a really turn on, but that is not the important thing...the best of the fic, is the way it is developing, and how they are starting to have some kind of feelings towards each others!! thats soo cool!
and i loove how you are starting to develop a little relationship btw luna and ron!! the bad part of this is that harry and ginny cant go together to the ball!! that sooo bad!!

update A.S.A.P ( n i really mean it when i said ASAP!!)

CYA!!!

AND CONGRATS FOR SUCH A FANTASTIC FIC!!

Hey, hope chapter 14 is coming along good. I check back everyday to see if something new has been posted. I also have a question for you. In you comments following chapter 11, you mentioned a song entitled \"Finally.\" I\'m interested in knowing who sings it so I can check it out myself. Alafteafter reading the chapter where Draco agreed to meet hermione after their big fight and he found her curled up, alone and freezing, a song came to my mind. Vertical Horizon- Best i ever had(grey sky morning). It applies to both of them, and it was the first thing that I thought of. Just thought I\'d let you know, because it\'s a great song.

I gave a whoop of joy when I saw that this story has been updated! When I first found this site, this story hooked me in. I must say Draco is a very conflicted character. Their relationship is very emotional, isn\'t it? I look forward to the ball.

That was great, Pixy! I

That was GREAT:) We totally need more smut in the story again.

I can\'t believe Ron didn\'t yank Hermione out of Draco\'s arms when she fainted. Doesn\'t he still love her or atleast hate Draco enough to not want them touching?Oh well, I still love the chapter; especially with the finger fuck fest. But, I think Hermione\'s mind is a little too far gone until she actually gets some real sex - poor Hermione:( and Draco\'s not even sharing some of that potion with her. He\'s a Malfoy. He shouldn\'t be that scare of her. He should ignore all his emtions (like a Malfoy) and fuck her brains out:) I just want to read more about them. There\'s so much ballooned up emtions between them, I can\'t wait for the next chapter:) Please update very soon:)

Excellent can\'t wait til the next chapter is up...

LINIS