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I hope you know that I love you, your writing skills, and your fanfiction. Please continue ASAP!

I love this story! Your smut is divine and you write the characters so well. I honestly don\'t think I could want Draco more! He is quite YUMMMMMY! ;)
I was trying to write a D/Hr fic and could not get the characterization right on Hermione. I admire your ability to take all the characters into your story and remain true to them. Especially Draco and Hermione. They are so well-written and your story has provided them an excellent way to get together. Draco is still the arrogant git pureblood and Hermione the know-it-all muggle-born and you have them falling in love so realistically. I\'m also impressed at your knowledge of mythology and like that you\'ve incorporated it into your story.

My favourite Draco moment so far has to be him using Expelliarmus on Ron as he comes for Hermione. That was truly well-done and had me sufficiently turned-on! Mmmm, Angry!Draco is fine!

I\'d be interested in some way of getting updates. I\'m not sure what the dates are on the chapters (is inf info available somewhere I\'m not seeing?) so I don\'t know if it\'s been a week, a month or a year since the last chapter. I need to know what happens to Draco and Hermione! Do they get together? Will they brew up the cure for the lustion?ion? Will Lucius make another glorious appearance? Will Draco need to choose between Hermione and his father? And if he does who will he choose? Will Ron and Luna find love in each other\'s arms? I do hope you continue this story because I\'m quite fond of it. :D

I really liked your fan fic and I hope that you update soon. It\'s so great. I really liked the story and love draco. (draco\'s so hot) haha. keep up the good work =)

Loved the new chapter sigh

I love this fic.
It\'s new and refreshing.
This is a great story I hope you keep updating cause uld uld love to know what happens next.
I also love your other fanfics they are amazing.
Keep up the good work.

sometimes the non-workings of aff.net is a blessing. it makes as if there is less wait between chapters because of access struggle involved. but yes-please include me in whatever ml you create.
*sigh* i love this fic. so their revelations come to light. good- those sort of troubled waters should be settled then. there were many great moments in this fic. the fork hexing bit. you had ginny\'s sacrifice of wearing that angel hat which amused me because she designed away to wear it for such a short period of time.
you had that goldilocks story which was so incredibly adorable in so many ways. the fact that malfoy was to be the one with the golden locks, that the story was quite reversed, the traits exibited by each character. though i must say i kept picturing the trio as humanized bears, that made it all the more funny not to mention malfoy having longer, wavier hair and a red bow. it was just so sweet- that moment createth tth that story.
of course thre was thee goyle and neveille incident that i cant but help being proud of the boys for. esp since they united forces against not only pansy but snape and then got the much deserved back pats for it. i hope those two get to hang out in the future.
-but im wondering just what will be revealed to ginny if in fact she had followed those two. how much did she see and hear and what will she make of that information.
-im also enamoured that you did all that research for the golden apples and i liked how you posted it since my interest is all the more peaked with the knowledge that i have received.
i do hope you write more soon. thank you.
p.s. isnt 20 galleons way too much for a bet of that nature between classmates?

Hello Pixiezombie =)
Although I usually read HG/SS, I do like HG/DM just as well, if not better for various reasons (I see similarities in both ships =P). I\'ve been working my way through various HG/DM fics, and while I\'ve been appalled by quality of many of these, I really like Adamo Fidelitas. The characterisation is excellent, the story intriguing, and of course, your style of writing is . The only part I didn\'t enjoy in AF is the occasional \'you\'re/your\' used wrongly. This is reaaaally common in fics, and not the most annoying mistake in fanfiction (trust me, I thought I was going to scratch my eyes out because of some of the unbelievable mistakes). While it doesn\'t really affect the impact of your writing, it does detract slightly. I\'m afraid I\'m like Hermione in a sense that if I notice something wrong, I nag about it -_-;;
It\'s the wee hours of the morning,I onI only remember the \'you\'re\' and the extra \'e\' in \'blonde\'. As Draco is a male, \'blonde\' should be the masculine \'blond\'. Sorry about that ^^;;
Thanks for a really entertaining (and in parts, v.steamy *fans face*) read, and I hope you update soon =)

-Anna

ps: About that update list... I\'m VERY interested! =D

sometimes the non-workings of aff.net is a blessing. it makes as if there is less wait between chapters because of access struggle involved. but yes-please include me in whatever ml you create.
*sigh* i love this fic. so their revelations come to light. good- those sort of troubled waters should be settled then. there were many great moments in this fic. the fork hexing bit. you had ginny\'s sacrifice of wearing that angel hat which amused me because she designed away to wear it for such a short period of time.
you had that goldilocks story which was so incredibly adorable in so many ways. the fact that malfoy was to be the one with the golden locks, that the story was quite reversed, the traits exibited by each character. though i must say i kept picturing the trio as humanized bears, that made it all the more funny not to mention malfoy having longer, wavier hair and a red bow. it was just so sweet- that moment created with that story.
of course thre was thee goyle and neveille incident that i cant but help being proud of the boys for. esp since they united forces against not only pansy but snape and then got the much deserved back pats for it. i hope those two get to hang out in the future.
-but im wondering just what will be revealed to ginny if in fact she had followed those two. how much did she see and hear and what will she make of that information.
-im also enamoured that you did all that research for the golden apples and i liked how you posted it since my interest is all the more peaked with the knowledge that i have received.
i do hope you write more soon. thank you.
p.s. isnt 20 galleons way too much for a bet of that nature between classmates?

sometimes the non-workings of aff.net is a blessing. it makes as if therelessless wait between chapters because of access struggle involved. but yes-please include me in whatever ml you create.
*sigh* i love this fic. so their revelations come to light. good- those sort of troubled waters should be settled then. there were many great moments in this fic. the fork hexing bit. you had ginny\'s sacrifice of wearing that angel hat which amused me because she designed away to wear it for such a short period of time.
you had that goldilocks story which was so incredibly adorable in so many ways. the fact that malfoy was to be the one with the golden locks, that the story was quite reversed, the traits exibited by each charr. tr. though i must say i kept picturing the trio as humanized bears, that made it all the more funny not to mention malfoy having longer, wavier hair and a red bow. it was just so sweet- that moment created with that story.
of coursre wre was thee goyle and neveille incident that i cant but help being proud of the boys for. esp since they united forces against not only pansy but snape and then got the much deserved back pats for it. i hope those two get to hang out in the future.
-but im wondering just what will be revealed to ginny if in fact she had followed those two. how much did she see and hear and what will she make of that information.
-im also enamoured that you did all that research for the golden apples and i liked how you posted it since my interest is all the more peaked with the knowledge that i have received.
i do hope you write more soon. thank you.
p.s. isnt 20 galleons way too much for a bet of that nature between classmates?

sometimes the non-workings of aff.net is a blessing. it makes as if there is less wait between chapters because of access struggle involved. but yes-please include me in whatever ml you create.
*sigh* i love this fic. so their revelations come to light. good- those sort of troubled waters should be settled then. there were many great moments in this fic. the fork hexing bit. you had ginny\'s sacrifice of wearing that angel hhichhich amused me because she designed away to wear it for such a short period of time.
you had that goldilocks story which was so incredibly adorable in so many ways. the fact that malfoy was to be the one with the golden locks, that the story was quite reed, ed, the traits exibited by each character. though i must say i kept picturing the trio as humanized bears, that made it all the more funny not to mention malfoy having longer, wavier hair and a red bow. it was just so sweet- that moment created with that story.
of course thre was thee goyle and neveille incident that i cant but help being proud of the boys for. esp since they united forces against not only pansy but snape and then got the much deed bed back pats for it. i hope those two get to hang out in the future.
-but im wondering just what will be revealed to ginny if in fact she had followed those two. how much did she see and hear and what will she make of that information.
-im also enamoured that you did all that research for the golden apples and i liked how you posted it since my interest is all the more peaked with the knowledge that i have received.
i do hope you write more soon. thank you.
p.s. isnt 20 galleons too too much for a bet of that nature between classmates?