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I do love this story... chapter 14 in particular, since I\'m a romantic sap at heart :)
Absolutely lovely. Adored the \"Goldilocks\"-story :)

Such a lovely fic! I hope you mean to keep going.

very interesting story... i have been waiting for an update for a while now! don\'t give up on this one!

Absolutely wonderful! I read all that you\'ve posted so far in one sitting, and loved every single moment of it. The plot is fantastic, the sex is superb, and it keeps the characters in character. There were times I laughed aloud, which isn\'t something I do often when reading fanfiction, and other times I swear I could have cried. I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat in anticipation of what would happen, and you have done a marvelous job fufilling my expectations. What an amazing job you did with the whole \"Putting Draco in a full-body bind just as he reaches orgasm.\" And here I\'d thought Hermione was really Pansy using a polyjuice potion and was going to hex his balls off...Ha!
There are a few spelling mistakes that I noticed, and one major plot mix-up. Back in one of the first few chapters, when Draco was looking for the cure, Snape mentioned that the Helios Apple would not be ripe for a while yet. I believe it was sometime in March or May that they\'d get the cure finished, so with chapter fourteen taking place in the greenhouse with the apples in bloom throws the plot off a bit. Unless they were actually only just blooming now, and not ripe...So I could be mistaken. If so, disregard that.
One more thing I feel I must point out. There was an attack on Hermione\'s room, but since the attack nothing really has been done about it. It was only brought up once or twice, so I\'d been wondering when that would pop up again. I\'m dying to find out who it was that did that.
All in all, very good work! I look forward to reading more in the future.

Please update!!!

hi! i love this fic! its excellent! if u do make a miling list to email people when you update can you please put me on it??

thanx Emma

Hiya just logged back looking for updates to my fav fics and am just leaving a review to say we are still here checking back for the ending to one of the best Hem/Draco fics out there. Keep up the good work and update soon.

*whimper*

Oh my, I just can not wait to see where this is going! I've spent about 10 hours reading this whole thing (with a brief interlude for what we mortals call "sleep") and am just fascinated.

I was hoping to see these 14 chapters house the whole story, though I admit that a sick, twisted viper in my soul is thrilled that it's not... because of the simple fact that, though t'will be a torture to wait (though not enough to send me to St. Mungo's, thankfully!), I will do so gladly.

If you do indeed create a mailing list, please, add me to it! I would really like to know when you've updated, so I can glutinously devour the next chapter.

~Paige

I just found this story and I have been reading it all day!! it is the absolute best harry potter story that i have ever read!! I really love it...you write really really well. I know that you are probably very busy...but I would really really love it if you could update this story...it is just too amazing not to finish. If you are going to do an update list...I would love to be on it.(chelle2006@aol.com) Great job on this story!!

Please, pretty please update soon (or at least let us know what's going on from your bio page). I love this fic and I just hope you haven't abandoned it.