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for Adamo Fidelitas

by pixiezombie

person Josh Cohen
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reading something like this makes me realize just how many liberties so many D/Hr authors -- including myself, to a lesser extent -- take with canon. It is extremely difficult to keep the two of them in character at the same time, and that may be why it\'s such a popular pairing -- because the way it\'s written, the odds are good it couldn\'t possibly happen.

But I believe it, after reading this. I believe that even canon-Draco and canon-Hermione can tolerate each other enough to make scads of whoopee. Good story. Amusing, too.
person Constructive Flamer
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick question, (Wooo I love your story by the way. I got the link from raffyv\'s smut vault).

\"I\'ll knock his block off.\" -Ron (The begining of Chapter Three)

Did you get that from common English phrases, or the movie 101 Dalmations (Disney)? Because that\'s what it made me think of when I read it. This is a cool story so far, I suppose its finished since I found it in the smut vault, but you\'re an awesome writer and I would like to read more of your stuff after this.

Good Job,

CF
person Natalie (natyslacks)
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* I love this story so far....thats why i\'m writing this at 4:51 am trying not to wake my parents as I was so addicted to this story and my key board is extreemly loud.so I better cut it short. \"THIS STORY IS BLOODY BRILLIANT\" I think that sums it up :D Please update soon, when ever you can.
Luv Naty
person KanSol
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m totally inlove with your story. Can\'t wait for the next update.
person stephanie
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey great story! its been forever since an update, are you done with writing fanfiction??
person Elisa
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have recently been reading some fan fic and let me tell you Adamo Fidelitas is probable the best I have read. I am very disappointed it is not finished and I see you have not updated for almost a year. Do you plan on finishing it? It would be a pity you didn\'t. I`m a big fan of greek mithology and I have loved your references to it. Your Hermione and Draco are very much alive, not empty like in many other stories I have read.
You have a fan fron South America in me and I really hope to read the end of the story. If you ever decide on updating it, could you please mail me?
Congratulations once more.
Best regards,
Elisa
person Jess
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic!... it is so good... and the whole plot is very clever... i have a feeling that it was pansy who did that to her room but i might be wrong... anyway, i hope you update soon... see ya!
person CLowe
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update this. Don\'t leave us all at the last chapter and not finish it.
person Lrnd
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a totally awesome story and I would like to be added to your update list ... I love the Goldilocks story, also I had a question about how was Draco affected by the potion? I was just a tad confused ... My own thoughts were that it happened because the first and second person to take the potion would be affected or the first person he kissed? Just a query?

EXCELLENT Story though ... how will HG ever regain his trust is just another question
person rani
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, are you still updating??

anyway i think this story is AWESOME!!