AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.

rate_review Reviews

for Plaything

by Malfoywhore

person nocturnali
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh... interesting. She\'s pregnant, isn\'t she? Bound to happen, I s\'pose, with that much sex on a daily basis. You\'d think that two such intelligent gentlemen would think about that outcome. Whose baby? Will she even be allowed to keep it? Could this be the final turning point? Aaaaargh!!! Need more. Had to wait so long for this chapter, thought you\'d forgotten story. What a shame she was a virgin at the beginning of the story. Imagine if she\'d been pregnant to Harry, but not known about it. Wot fun!!!
person Poggy from FAP
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I read this story until chapter 11 on ff.net... And casually found chpater 12 here. Please keep on writing! Very twisted, but inteing ing indeed! Good job!
person thepetraven
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story and i hope that you will update this soon because i cant wait to find out what happens.
person Alena Liddrel
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I WAS SO HAPPY WHEN I SAW YOU HAD A NEW CHAPTER UP!! I LOVE YOUR STORY, PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ultrapuella@yahoo.com
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this last chapter! It seems Severus/Lucius are about to get their (well deserved) comeuppance(s)!
Carry on!
person deedee
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!You\'re finally back!!! And OMG Hermione is pregnant!!! Right? I mean she has fuller breasts and \"..her stomach is slightly rounded..\" and she has the glow, she is SO pregnant. I wonder who the father is: Severus, Lucius, or maybe Draco (j/k I don\'t think he actually finished.). I loved the part when she almost said Lucius\' s name. I know she did it on purpose, but he really shouldn\'t blame her. I mean she is being switched back and forth between the two of them and being screwed senseless, it could be hard to even remember what day it is.
Severus is not stupid, but if she not careful, he\'s going to figure something out. Then again, he seems to be a bit unfocused when she is around. I wonder if she used the owl to send a note to Harry. I can\'t wait to read more. I hope you don\'t wait too long to update.
person Zee
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have waited forever for this next chapter. It was worth the wait. Most excellent. Please do not wait so LONG to update again...
person Apollonia
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! She almost cried out Lucius\' name when she was with Severus. *shakes head* Man, oh man, oh man. That\'s NOT good. I wonder what\'s going to happen next. Also, I wanted to ask you when will we see Draco again? He didn\'t get to finish himself with Hermione that laime ime and I was kind of hoping that they get it on. *wickedly grins* Awesome story! Please continue. I had been waiting for an update for ages. ;)
person Lidra
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Finish it! Finish it!
person dryade
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best stories i\'ve ever read. it\'s so full of emotion. one moment you turn me on and the next moment i\'m so close to tears i can hardly read on. it\'s a wonderful s! dr!