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for Plaything

by Malfoywhore

person cindel
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*taps foot impatiently* Update dammit! lol Seriously, Im loving this story but if you have it end like \"A spell to turn tigers to butter\" I will have you murdered! I found your story to be far more interesting, and well written.
person marissa
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i must say i find myself enchanted with this fascinating story. i am transfigured, a snake held by the seductive melody of its charmer. i cannot wait to see where the labrynth of obsession leads. i must say that i am aroused by malfoy. can you tell me why good girls like bad guys? i especially like the dagger scene. i see you know how to manipulate pain. even his subtle threat of pain is so intoxicating.
person Woodsgypsy
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a great story! Love how you don done the alternating pov. I usually don\'t like pov stories but this one is very well done. Please keep writing and update soon!!!!!!!
person Chthonia
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was certainly atereteresting read, in more ways than one! ;-)

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person lilly bet
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
come on you can not tell me that she is not falling atleast a little bit in love with them, especially severus. this is a great story i just hope it has happy ending for our main characters. and you know what it could be interesting to see a threesome form???
person ImpendingSilence
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing story!!! I usually don\'t read darkfics, but this one caught my attention when I saw a note for it on WIKTT. All I can say is wow! I\'m in love with this story and I can\'t wait to read the end. Please update soon! And btw, thank you for your impeccable punctuation and spelling. You\'ve made an english teacher very happy.
person XX294XX
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I hope u haven\'t given up on it. Write more!
person Sweetietrebligj
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY! UPDATE SOON!
person snape\'s dark haired girl
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very well done with an interesting premise. I hope that youl upl update it soon!
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awaiting the next update!