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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW...Great Update!!
I'm so glad to see you return!
Hope to see more soon....
I'm so glad to see you return!
Hope to see more soon....
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i looove your story, it's really exciting! i like it how hermione plays them against each other! hurry with an update please!
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey! i'm a big fan of this fanfic.. when will you update again?!?!?!? please, please!!! hehe.. i've been reading this back at the old site of adultfic. net.. then again, i'm surprised to find it again now.. so please do update sooN! please!!!!!
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is an intriguing story. I'm glad our little lioness is thinking on her feet. I bet she is going to pull a mirical out of this situation.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutely fascinating story. I am a former victim of an emotionally/mentally/physically abusive relationship (this story does not upset me, though!), and I love seeing the exquisite development of Severus's, Lucius's, and Hermione's characters. They ring so true when in most similar stories the emotions are contrived. Keep up the writing!
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please please PLEASE finish this story soon! I can't wait to read the rest. Your writing is really amazing, and the storyline is great - it would work well, even without the sex. (Not that I don't like the sex - it makes the story all the more addictive) I'm just itching to know if Severus is going to use his poison against Lucius - and if Hermione is going to use her "plan" against Lucius too.
You get two very big thumbs up from me! Thanks for such an entertaining story!
You get two very big thumbs up from me! Thanks for such an entertaining story!
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very good and well written story with a very disturbing plot!!! I had to read as far as you have written! I want to know what happens next! So I read your chapters, even if at the same time I can not understand why hermione has not tried to kill herself! What life will await her, even if she should find a way to escape? With the dark taking over (I don
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty damnn effing good I might say because I really don't have the words to sum it up any other way.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, is that it? What's going on? Who ends up with her? Does Snape? Come on, Update soon, please?
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was a dark PWP, and then I was pleasantly disappointed ;-) This story is getting seriously deep. I dare guess you plan to turn the tables and let Harry overthrow Voldy. I cannot imagine what Hermione's punishment to her two obsessed masters would be. Please don't abandon the story.