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for Plaything

by Malfoywhore

person Lillyanna
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was just as good as the first chapter. It is perfection! I hope you will write more.
person Severella
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Grins* Yet another marvellous chapter, and so soon after the first one! I can\'t wait to see more of this, especially from the Snape/Hermoine POV.

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It\'s really amazing how you can take a cruel character like Lucius Malfoy and make him both caring and heartless within the same instance. The ability to make such a dimensional character (from one meant to be so shallow, narcissistic, and sadistic) is truly a testiment to your skill, and as such I\'d like to know if you have anything else written that I should be aware of.
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Again, great fic, great beginning, and I\'ll be checking back for updates soon.
person reader
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
don\'t you dare stop!! This is so good, I can\'t wait for more. Hermoine\'s POV would be an excellent addition to your enthralling story
person Meg
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I\'m not really keen on anything with Snape in it, or Hermonie for that matter but I do love this story, could a 17 year old humanise a death eater? Hmmm

Keep it up, waiting \'patiently\' for more...
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So... are we going to get more?! I can just picture Snape and Malfoy fighting over their slave *GRINS EVILLY*

That was very interesting and well written!
Thanks!
Karena Elizabeth
person JD
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i think you should write a lucius POV
person Nell
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely! you *have* to write Lucius POV!! and more!
Lucius my favorite evil man! don\'t leave him out!

Keep writing! Great story you have here!
I\'m eagerly waiting for an update!
person Lillyanna
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is beyond worth continuing. Please do Lucius next. I loved your other story as well. You are a really, really good writer!
person hurricane
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Start. I wanted to dislike Snape, but just couldn\'t, I can\'t wait to hear Malfoy\'s POV. Please continure with the story.
person Kitty Kat
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I would be great if you did Lucius pov... Update soon, please!