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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is rulouulously good! the best thing I\'ve read in MONTHS! I\'m hooked like a young kid on pokemon.
please please keep Severus as the more leniant but none the less masterly one, it\'s perfect and believable
look forward to the next installment
jill
please please keep Severus as the more leniant but none the less masterly one, it\'s perfect and believable
look forward to the next installment
jill
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool fic! It\'s a bit different fromt I t I usually see on here, but I like this type of stuff. I\'m glad that you gave Hermione a POV as well. Good luck with the next chapter!
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If evil is beautiful, that
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Not a lot of people can write D/S fics very well. You can. I cannot wait to see how Severus is going to dwithwith having to share Hermione with Lucius. And what will happen with Lucius after that. Keep it up, you\'re good.
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This is really well written. I thought it was going to be just about sex, but it\'s pretty emotional too. Please continue:)
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is seriously your first angst-fic? O.o I wouldn\'t have guessed had you not told me...
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Another lovely chapter. I liked the bit about Hermoine and the table--\"It\'s not my place anymore\"--a poignant ending to a rather amusing chapter. ( Amusing, I mean, in a good, want-to-read-tons-more sort of way) I also think it swell that you can write so swiftly and still make it coherent. Most people can\'t do that...
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Anyways, can\'t wait for the next bit!
~Severella Snape
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Another lovely chapter. I liked the bit about Hermoine and the table--\"It\'s not my place anymore\"--a poignant ending to a rather amusing chapter. ( Amusing, I mean, in a good, want-to-read-tons-more sort of way) I also think it swell that you can write so swiftly and still make it coherent. Most people can\'t do that...
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Anyways, can\'t wait for the next bit!
~Severella Snape
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! This is wonderful! (I adore Snape, when he is good OR bad!) Please tell me this isn\'t the end!
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I will definitely keep reading! This is such departure from any SS/HG/LM type story I\'ve ever read. Heck - most slave stories start off, \'ohh I\'ve loved you for so long\' type things -se mse men just lust for her *grin* But she\'s pulling some strings of her own, even if she doesn\'t see it yet - I wonder how long until she does ;)
Thanks!
Karena Elizabeth
Thanks!
Karena Elizabeth
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going. This is getting good. The rivalry between Lucius and Severus with Hermoine in the middle is getting good.
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heck, I\'d choose Snape over Malfoy an (th (the guy is just a bit too evil) :-).
Anyways - great job, keep it up!
Anyways - great job, keep it up!