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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
One way that Hermione might be able to fight back is by playing them off against each other. Snape and Malfoy are wildly competitive, no more so than in this arrangement. Hermione could plainly express a preference for Snape. Appearing happy to see him would thrill Snape, and reinforce his desire to show her affection. It would absolutely drive Lucius mad. He\'s so accustomed to being the handsome, desirable one. He (and Voldemort) are convinced that Hermione must find him more attractive. If Hermione seems more attracted to--even fond-- of Snape, it may cause Lucius to modify his behavior in order to compete with Snape. Only this time, Hermione can change the nature of the competition. Instead of who can degrade and abuse her the most, the competition could change into who could win her affections. Captives have to use the weapons at hand. Divide and conquer is the one that has worked most often.
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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a cracking read! Love the competition between Severus & Lucius, you write for both charcters quite well! Also liked how you incorporated Hermione\'s pov. I\'m really curious to see where this story will go. PLEASE continue!
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May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was a great pov for lucius!!!!\\
i cant wait for more~
thanx for emailing me with the chapters!!
this is da best story eva
i cant wait for more~
thanx for emailing me with the chapters!!
this is da best story eva
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May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Claps* Dude, at this rate, I have more reason than ever to be online checking for updates! *Grins* I\'m liking the way you just belt this out, chapter after chapter--no muss, no fuss, no waiting!
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Hmm...very interesting, the way Lucius\' subtle emotions are slowly coming into play...that is, if you could *call* them emotions. The same applies for Severus--and frankly, I\'m more interested in he than Lucius. (Sorry, but I LoVe my Sevvy!) More and more you pique my curiosity...where, oh where are you going to go with this? After all, this is just my sort of story--perverted virtue, enslaved grace? I\'m there!
*Blinks* Sorry, sleep deprivation causes my though trains to de-rail horribly before I quite have the chance to even *finish* a though, so if this is rather garbled, I apologize.
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Can\'t wait to read more! Keep \'em coming...
Salivating impatiently for the next chapter,
-Severella Snape
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Hmm...very interesting, the way Lucius\' subtle emotions are slowly coming into play...that is, if you could *call* them emotions. The same applies for Severus--and frankly, I\'m more interested in he than Lucius. (Sorry, but I LoVe my Sevvy!) More and more you pique my curiosity...where, oh where are you going to go with this? After all, this is just my sort of story--perverted virtue, enslaved grace? I\'m there!
*Blinks* Sorry, sleep deprivation causes my though trains to de-rail horribly before I quite have the chance to even *finish* a though, so if this is rather garbled, I apologize.
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Can\'t wait to read more! Keep \'em coming...
Salivating impatiently for the next chapter,
-Severella Snape
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved how she moved closer to lucius for protection from draco, classic stockholm syndrome! brilliant
more severus soon! :D
more severus soon! :D
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! The part with Draco was great. Please write more.
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you are continuing with this fabulous story. And seeing inside all three minds is a great angle. Question: Are they giving her anything to keep her from getting pregnant? I haven\'t seen potions or the like and having sex everyday - well the odds climb sky high, ya\' know?
Thanks for the update!
Karena Elizabeth
Thanks for the update!
Karena Elizabeth
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent storI reI really don\'t want Hermione to win against these two, but I have a feeling she will. Don\'t do it!! Lucius must always win!! Love it...need more.
ALI
ALI
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is amazing! It