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May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohh!! the story gets complicated! There a lot lot more involved now.. I mean, befit wit was only about Hermione being the plaything of Snape and Malfoy, now add to that, Ron\'s death and what Harry might have felt knowing that he left Hermione alone when the deatheaters arrived (not by choice, but he left her anyway).. plus her own need to feel useful, intelligent again, not quite getting used to being less than a house elf! (nice touch there! lol!) something more than what she\'s now.. yeah, there\'s more to her feelings now, it\'s like getting the big picture, it\'s not just being kept captive anymore, it\'s also knowing that one your best friend died, that you don\'t have any hope, or that you\'re less of what you once were.
Phew! THAT was what I got from that chapter. Pretty intense. and ansgty..ohh and I like it! Keep it up! good work you\'ve done!
More more more more!!! :D
Phew! THAT was what I got from that chapter. Pretty intense. and ansgty..ohh and I like it! Keep it up! good work you\'ve done!
More more more more!!! :D
schedule
May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! Another great chapter. Hermione\'s POV was so intense. I feel bad for her:( Her little outbruith ith Severus was a shock. Would he really hurt her?
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May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you update often. I want more though, and certainly more Lucius. I love Snape-y too, but damn, you write Lucius well. I want him. Er, I want him to be in the next part. *assures herself* Yep, that\'s what I want. Lucius... in the next part. *nods*
Cheers,
Sing
Cheers,
Sing
schedule
May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
gah! you have me totally hooked I can\'t stop checking for updates
the last chapter, just the perfect balance again with Severus, you\'re writing it well because I find myself wanting Hermione to want him even after all he\'s done
excellent work
the last chapter, just the perfect balance again with Severus, you\'re writing it well because I find myself wanting Hermione to want him even after all he\'s done
excellent work
schedule
May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, more of a character chapter than anything. Too bad, I like how Severus seduces her, but I did get a bit of that. I know you\'ve got this from the other story, i just hope it doesn\'t end the same way.
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May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. What an intense story! I\'m on tenderhooks.
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May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Power, thy name is woman. If only she could tell how insane he is for her! *grins biggly* Okay, so you\intointo torture of innocent readers by not telling us what\'s going to happen before it happens? I can respect that *VEG* Great story!
Thanks for the update!
Karena Elizabeth
Thanks for the update!
Karena Elizabeth
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May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool, I\'m enjoying it so far. I love the triangle. I wonder if Voldemort gave her to them just to see what kind of confusion it would cause.
I don\'t know about Draco, Have this love/hate thing for his cha. (love the strong misunderstood/hate the winny bratty). anyway, I love whatve rve read so far and will keep watching for more.
I don\'t know about Draco, Have this love/hate thing for his cha. (love the strong misunderstood/hate the winny bratty). anyway, I love whatve rve read so far and will keep watching for more.
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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is just brilliant! I love how you have them going back and forth like that. And Lucius, give me more Lucius! Between the two, his dealings with her are much more interesting. Please email me when there\'s an update? And more Lucius! Now, now, now!
Cheers,
Sing
Cheers,
Sing
schedule
May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh another chapter!! You\'re making my!!
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I love how you\'re building the tension between Snape and Lucius.. very subtle, they\'re impatient to get their time with Hermione. And now you just \'dropped\' Draco in the middle just to complicate it a little bit!! That was perfect!
I can\'t wait for the chapter.. I wonder if Hermione will ever know the power she\'s got over those two.. or if they will notice it.
Great story! Keep it up. You\'re doing great!
Awaiting for the next chapter!
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I love how you\'re building the tension between Snape and Lucius.. very subtle, they\'re impatient to get their time with Hermione. And now you just \'dropped\' Draco in the middle just to complicate it a little bit!! That was perfect!
I can\'t wait for the chapter.. I wonder if Hermione will ever know the power she\'s got over those two.. or if they will notice it.
Great story! Keep it up. You\'re doing great!
Awaiting for the next chapter!