rate_review Reviews

I\'ll say off thte bat, I\'ve never been much of a het fan. And I have a short attention span, when I see a story that has more then two chapters, I generally saw screw it. And the plot of this...eh, it piqued some interest. I\'m quite the Severus fan, becoming more of a Hermione fan. Could take or leave Lucius really, depending. But I found myself reading all you have posted of this entire work. And I enjoyed it. Wording was quite nice, characterization was better then most, and the plot is certainly one that gets the reader. I can say I was quite pleasently surprised. And it takes a hell of a lot to surprise me. Looking forward to more.

I can\'t wait for Draco\'s part in all of this. I wonder if he is just like his father. Please update very soon.

Lucius is an evil bastard leaving the girl like that. Well, I hope Draco is gentle enough for our girl. Though I dislike Draco/Hermione, the girl does need release. You need to update more.

I\'m sick, but I think Hermoine is a lucky, lucky lady! Lucuis AND Severus! oh yummy! Be still my beating heart!!!!

I hate Lucius for being a

very good so far!!! What happens if one of them says he *killed* her and really kept her to himself???

That was another magnificent chapter as usual! I noticed that many readers are craving for a Draco POV and I must say that I do too! My fave ship is actually Draco/Hermione but obviously, I also enjoy Lucius/Hermione fics! (especially the dark & sensual ones)
Could you please make the sex scenes more explicit?

I love this fic soooo much. It is kinda how i imagine Sev and Lucius could be. (dark and controlled.). Obviously this fic isn`t about love, but i feel that if someone were placed in this situation they may begin to mistake this obsession for love. Also coming through for me is a sense of insanity about the death eaters, as if the enslavering of Hermione was just normal behaviour for them. A very sensual and erotic fic in ay day dark and disturbed way. Please write more.

Oh yeah...still enjoying it. I wish I\'d written it, but there you go. More Lucius...and please don\'t let him fall for her. I\'d much prefer him to let Sev have her...or maybe just kill her...out of spite. That way neither get her. LOL

Shocking,

higly erotic (I\'m ashamed to admit),

and what the most shocking thing is - it is almost believable.

Especialle fae fact that she is more embarrassed of her reactions to Snape
because he is so gentle in comparison to Malfoy.

I think that that is indeed worse to beare (sp?) than the cruelty and sadism of Lucius Malfoy.

I am only happy that it is only fiction - rape, after all, is rape and in reality,
NOT erotic, but only violence and an unforgivable crime. I think, you agree.

Please, write on