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i'm soooo gladd you've finally updated this story! it's really great! keep on updating please!

I am so glad you decided to take this story form ch.13 onward. Hope you keep this going for a long time; I always wanted to read more of this story.

Up to now she has only played on their love, hate or jealousies, making them react like she wants them to. Having Hermione say that Lucius told her something in particular can cause trouble if Severus and him compare notes, they could realize that Hermione is manipulating them. As long as you are having them react to her without her lying to them, they have no lies to catch her at.

But that could be en interesting twist to this story. There is no reason to fallow the same script than the inspiration piece. They could find out her plan and use it against her?

Or perhaps they are too involved to notice but some third party, (maybe Voldemort checking how his present to the two death eaters is working out), can catch on and alert them. Or this third party, (maybe another death eater like Rudy or his brother), can help Hermione and then keep her for himself.

Please update soon!

update soon! Don't leave us hanging like this!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Fantastic. I've been reading it in bits, with the danger of pulling an all nighter to get to this point, but finally I've achieved "The end" as far as you've gotten, at least. It's wonderful. I fresh breath of P.O.V. shifting that makes sense but isn't androgenous and monotonous. You've crafted your story well and there is a good show of time and effort that has gone into your plot and technique. I do hope that you will continue on, and quite soon, though as an author myself I know what it's like to not be able to post like twice daily as the fans wish. The turn in the story is fantastic, I do hope, for her sake, that she pulls out. The details are exquisite. I feel like I'm there, a voyeristic fly that has inhabited the eyes of each of your muses. Phenomenal. I've probably shamed Vince Vaughn, I'm not sure I spelled that right. No matter, it's still amazing. Keep up the good work. My congratulations.

Wow, what an amazing story. It is intriguing in that I find myself not entirely sure that Hermione won't win out in the end. I hope she comes to appreciate Severus. Yes, I like Lucius, as well, too, but he's already got everything money can buy...

Update soon! I look forward to seeing how this turns out.

soooo confused. someone wrote this based on another fic and now you copied it at are ending it? i hope the first two authors are aware of all of this. in anycase this is an amazing fic. i found it on FFN almost three years ago and was thrilled to rediscover it. the new chapter is good, i wont be mean and compare it with the original, but it is good in general. keep it up. Demos

I don't know if the original author knows of your continuing their story, but you've respected the style and spirit of their work.

I am so pleased somebody has decided to pick up this story but I sincerely hope it doesn'tend the way the HP one does with Lucius and Severus killing each other and Hermione being given to Crabbe! well done