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WOW! I enjoyed the

Okay... *if* you hadn\'t added that little note at the end that she wasn\'t dead, I would be *really* mad! But you did - so here I sit, not mad but just frustrated! Update soon please! I\'ll be your best friend ;)

Thanks for this awesome story!
Karena Elizabeth

I didn\'t think Draco was going to be that bad.! The gorgeous bastard! It\'s time to kick some Malfoy ass! I\'m guessing Lucius won\'t want her around anymore. But he probably doesn\'t want Severo hao have sole possesion of her either. He\'ll just have to kill her. But will he be able to? Anyway, Severus womakemake his life hell. Right?

Gooooood! What a brilliant chr! Ir! I knew that Lucius would do that, I just knew it. I\'m getting good at this. I think that you have Lucius down to a T. And Draco. It\'s nice to read him being the truly EVIL one for once. God, I get so sick of seeing him fluff out. It\'s bloody pathetic. If you do plan on Severus walking in as Lucius is strangling her, I see him taking a different reaction from Lucius. Sev would likely draw his wand and incapacitate Lucius first. Then Lucius would snark. Then Sev would explain that she\'s too important to the Cause for him to kill her just yet. All said icily, of course. And Sev would be horrified at his own self-interest in the matter, as much as Lucius. But I think that he would hide it better. Believe it or not, I see Lucius as more kindly toward Hermione than Severus is in many aspects. Yes, Severus looks after Hermione\'s physical welfare, but Lucius keeps her mind alive. Of course they both have selfish reasons for doing so, but Hermione keeping her sanity intact is more important than her body getting a few bruises. Besides, Lucius hasn\'t done anything bad to her yet. Not anything that she hasn\'t enjoyed, at least. Love bruises and nicks with a knife really aren\'t much. This is the first time that Lucius has ever really harmed Hermione. I suspect that he\'ll feel torn the next time she comes into his company. He may not even have sex with her. I can actually see Lucius playing some chess with her or asking her to entertain him by some means. And finally, Lucius versus Severus... They compliment each other as opposites. Severus\' darkness is hidden deep within him and seems to spring up more naturally than anything else. But Lucius, well, yes he\'s quite perverted. However, he seems to be the more emotional of the two men. He seems to chose his words carefully for effect so that he doesn\'t say something \'wrong\', in other words, he really has to think about it before he says something. In Severus, it just flows out. Of the two, I could see Lucius becoming more emotionally attached to Hermione than Severus. That\'s just my tuppence there. :) And please, please, PLEASE... don\'t take so long to update? I was quite spoilt by the daily updates and I look for a new chapter of this story twice daily. I really love it. So I send good ju-ju vibes your way in hopes that the next chapter arrives quite soon into your devlish mind so that you can type it up and post.

Cheers,
Sing

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Really great story! I knew Draco would show up soon and you didn\'t disappoint! I like the interaction between Hermione and Severus too. Keep up the good work

I love it! I agree with the thought about Lucius being so repulsive butractractive and intruiging at the same time. Please don\'t kill Severus! I feel she would be better off with him then with either Malfoy, namely because Lucius is too homicidal to be trusted. At least Severus is only on his own side, and is more of a survivor. (Besides he is my favorite character next to the young Tom Riddle.)

Raven Genevera
The Oracle

Wow! *
I absolutely love this fic!
You\'re doing great and I\'m feeling SO impatient for the next chapter!
Keep up the wonderful work!

Sincere @He @Helena Rose~

AARRGGHHH!!! You are so mean! Leaving her all tied up! I have to tell you I actually went back and looked for your last update date and was worried you weren\'t going to update anymore. This is one of a few stories I\'m following very closely lately; great job!

Thank you for updating, and can I bride you to update sooner? I\'m talking house points here....

Karena Elizabeth

Very familiar. Very, very familiar. You haven\'t, by any chance, read any of Amanuensis\'s fics by any chance? Hmmmm?

Ah ha! I knew that one would be coming up! I have a feeling that Lucius is going to walk in on Draco playing with his pet and it\'s going to force him to admit something to himself. I can easily see him walking out and letting Draco have his way with her though, just to be perverse. After all, it would be in his character to not admit it to himself and walk away. Then again, it would also be in his character to pull Draco off, beat him about the head and shoulders, and then feel uncomfortable because he did so. Or he could find Hermione after Draco\'s had his way with her and do the comforting thing. So many evil, yet delicious, ways this one could play out. I know that my last two reviews have been something along the lines of \'more Lucius\' and not much else, so I apologise. But your story really gets me going and I\'m all excited to see the next part. I\'ve been checking back every day and having kittens because it took so long *not really* for this chapter to come up. Oh please get the next one to us soon! This story is brill! It\'s difficult to find something that satisfies this... perverse need to see character torture. You do this well. It isn\'t just about the sex; it\'s the consequences and story behind the sex *though the sex is REALLY good*. And I believe that you portray Hermione\'s reaction to it all perfectly. Not that this has happened to me, mind. But from what I\'ve studied, it\'s a natural, human reaction to fall in love with your \'prison guard\'. So who\'s it going to be, is the question. Lucius, who encourages her to feel? *please, please, please* Or Severus, who is a bit more gentle. *who wants gentle?* Obviously, you know my opinion on the matter. Not that you care, it\'s your story. hehe. So what\'s going to happen when she gets knocked up? I know that she has to get pregnant eventually; it would be impossible for her NOT to get pregnant. It would be really shitty if Draco did it. Eurgh. It\'ll be interesting to see how the fellows treat her when they find out. *this is all assumption on my part, mind you* Ah, great story love. Update tomorrow *or today* please!

Cheers,
Sing