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June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wait a bloody second here... You updated this on the 1st?? I\'m confused. I check here every bloody day, but I didn\'t see the update until today. *ponders* Something\'s screwy here. Well, if you really *did* update on the 1st, then that means that a new chapter is just that much closer, right? heh Ack. This place needs update notification.
Cheers,
Sing
Cheers,
Sing
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June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter so much even w/o the sex! LOL
I think it
I think it
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June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\" I came, I saw, I read.\" and don\'t forget that I highly enjoyed it. Girl keep up the good work, I can\'t wait to see what happens next, and I will highly anticipate the next chapter.:)
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June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Keep \'em coming!!!! Great work!!
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June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This really is quite fantastic. I look forward to seeing more of Hermione\'s first person narration--I think it balances the stort, gt, genderwise, and also--she appears to be the focal point of your piece, motivating both Lucius and Severus, manipulating their actions (however unconciously at this point). I\'m interested to see how she puts her cynicism to good use. Bravo!
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June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! that Draco interlude! (lol!) that was intense and then Lucius defending Hermione to then punish her for making him do it (he he he! evilly clever of you!) I loved that!!
Oh I hope Lucius will get redeemed to Hermione\'s eyes.. yeah, yeah, he almost killed her, but he regreted then, he was sorry; not that he would ever admitt it, but still, let\'s stick with primal emotions and he attacked Draco so, no everythign is lose with him... lol! yeah I know, he\'s my favorite evil character, can\'t help it. HE even gave her clothes and tried to make her feel better!! you have to give him credit for it!!
ikediked that Snape healed her, and I\'m keep on liking how you\'re writing Hermione. It\'s so real and believable. Your whole scenario, despite the millions of fics with the same theme, it\'s different.
Update soon, can\'t wait for the next chapter.
Oh I hope Lucius will get redeemed to Hermione\'s eyes.. yeah, yeah, he almost killed her, but he regreted then, he was sorry; not that he would ever admitt it, but still, let\'s stick with primal emotions and he attacked Draco so, no everythign is lose with him... lol! yeah I know, he\'s my favorite evil character, can\'t help it. HE even gave her clothes and tried to make her feel better!! you have to give him credit for it!!
ikediked that Snape healed her, and I\'m keep on liking how you\'re writing Hermione. It\'s so real and believable. Your whole scenario, despite the millions of fics with the same theme, it\'s different.
Update soon, can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOooohhh I love this. Where\'s chapter 9? o.o gimme more.
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. One of the few very VERY good smutfics that its.....just awesome. Update soon! *gets on knees and begs*You are a ver good writer, The characterizations are perfect given what has happened and the changes in the characters themselves *tries to sound smart* and while the smut pieces are interesting to read, you do them so that its a part of the story rather than than *plot* *smut* *plot/dialogue* *smut* etc. Can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I am loving this. You know, I don\'t care HOW gorgeous Lucius is, I would rather have Snape anyday! Although, I would REALLY like to see Hermoine knock the stuffing out of BOTH of them!
YUMMY YUMMY! More please!
Zee
YUMMY YUMMY! More please!
Zee
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying your story! Great points of view.
I\'m 100% for Severus!!!!!!!
Keep up the good work.
I\'m 100% for Severus!!!!!!!
Keep up the good work.