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EEeeeeek!!! This story is driving me crazy!!! I check up on it atleast three times a day to see if you\'ve updated. I\'m totally addicted, and I just can\'t get enough. This story is perfect. Its th perfect combo of hate, jealousy, rape, sex, and even the starts of romance??? OOOOO.....is Hermione playing them now?? Or does she actually llike Severus?? Omgoodness...you have got to update soon. I am never gonna make it through finals if I don\'t know what happens next. More power to Hermione!!!!! Mwa hahahaha...girls kick butt. I like Sevy, but thats just a personal thing. Is Harry ever gonna come?? OO you know what i think\'d be wacko. If Harry dies right in front of her and shes about to be killed but then one of the guys save her. Iunno. Now i have to make up my own ending untilyou continue, so hurry!!! I\'m gonna start dreaming now. This is such a great story...OOh i\'m hyper. Weelll...anyway...continue!!! Its great so never give up!!!!! -Pixie

I\'m glad to see that Hermione hasn\'t lost herself completely throughout this ordeal. She\'s a strong one, and you portray that, but nice and easily. It sort of slips in, naturally. :-)

Please write more!

Been on pins and needles waiting, thanks for the update! Can\'t decide which character you write best for, you have certainly captured a distinctive voice for each. Can\'t wait to see what happens next! Which one will make the first move to have her all to himself? What will the reactions be when they realize she is manipulating both of them? This is really well done, 50 house points for you!

Wow! I appears that Hermione is getting ready to have
Severus and Lucius destroy each other while she, um -
escapes! *smiles with hope*

But I have such a twisted mind and I am so in love with
Severus that I am forcing myself to believe that
Hermione *loves* (I say this delicately) Severus and
really wants him. *fingers crossed even though he has
been raping her this whole time - but damn, if that is
how Severus rapes, minus the sodomy, I am willing. Okay,
I just gave out too much information.)

Anyway, I am pulling for a HG/SS ending, but this
ich ach a dark story that I am cug myg myself for wanting
her to stay and fall in love with one of her rapists.

I know Lucius is trying to be nice to her but his idea of nice,
excuse me, \'wanting to get her another collar that will
bring out the color of her eyes and get her a matching leash!\' I could
strangle him with that damn collar!

Okay, enough said. I loved the chapter!!!!!

Hugs,
Corazon

Girl power! Go Hermione! She is going to wrap those two around her little fingers! Great chapter! I can\'t wait to see what happens next!

Karena Elizabeth

I love the story and am wishing and hoping for a HG/SS ending. Come on Sev you can do it!

YOU ARE MY (fanfictionwriting) GOD! *worships and grovels*

I love your story:) It always pu BIG BIG smile on my face when I read it. It\'s so cunning, evil, and definitely delious! The part about dentists was so funny. It\'s totally true!Hehehe:) I think Severus might start suspecting something\'s up if Hermione over does it. I was hoping Lucius would see Hermione as less of a pet and more of a person(lover?). But after he was talking about the leash and collar, my hopes were dashed. By the way, will Harry ever make an appearance? I guess it\'s for you to know and for me to find out:) Please write more soon.

Just wanted to be reviewer 100!! COngrats! Great story and update soon!