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by Malfoywhore

person Severella Snape
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, I\'m soooo sorry I haven\'t been able to review in so long! Rea life got in the way--college, finals, I graduate on tuesday the 1st of July--and everything just sort of fell down about my head.

Now, onto the story...

I\'m afraid I don\'t have much to say right now...however, I do plan on going back and re-reading this tomorrow morning, upon waking. That way, I may perhaps absorb the chapters I\'ve caught up on. But, from what I did manage to get through the fog of exhaustion was incredible!

Now I will sleep, and return on the morrow to read once more and give a solid, true review.

-Severella Snape
person SharonSnape
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Girl, you rock! LOVED Hermione taking back control, and wrapping Sev tighter around her finger. Keep up the good work!
person Deanna
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this is the most awesome story I\'ve read in a long time. I think I like Lucius\' side of the story better, and Draco is always a plus when he\'s in his evil bastard mode. But then again, softie Severus is interesting too. Keep up the EXCELLENT work.
person Dame Niamh
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM


Stunning. An incredible exploration of the linked mechanics of sexuality and sadism, power
and desire. More!
Blessed be,
Dame Niamh
person andie
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whew! It\'s getting very hot and steamy around here LOL! Great HG/SS smut, er, I mean, love scene LOL!
Yes, I think Lucius is an enjoyable character to write, especially since contextually you\'ve placed all 3 of your characters in an A/U, noncanonical situation--more leverage & freedom of interpretation, for reader and author!
really enjoying Hermione, I must say! More please.....as always, Brava!
person Fiery Slut
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! It
person The Oracle
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I know I reviewed before, but I really love this story! It is very refreshing to see Hermione get empowered by these two. I don\'t think they realise that is what they are doing, so it is interesting to see them play off each other\'s fears and not realize that they are being played. I admitted before that I adore Severus, especially when we see him being vulnerable every once in a while. I would love to see what happens if Hermione had to choose between the two, and to see if she has any affectionate feelings for them, especially if they start treating her well and like a human being, that would really turn the tables on both of them, and I\'m not above seeing either of them get a taste of their own medicine.
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AARRGGHHHH!! Okay - here it is. Do you know your story is a topic of interest in a group I am in? I kid you not. I ask: Plaything been updated yet? Corazon: Nope - I checked an hour ago. That conversation happened last night. ANd look! You updated! GO YOU!

I love this story. I keep trying to explain it to my (non-fanfic reading) huhsband. He just doesn\'t understand! Thanks for another chapter and I hope you update very very very soon!

Karena Elizabeth
person Some Random Chick
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, and i can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Hells Angel
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved this!! but I have a request. can you write in a few more Scenes where Lucius has Sex with hermione in more \"Exotic\" positions? please? if you can\'t, understandable, but my little smutty mind would like it. thanx!